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Agony

Smash the glass vase in Your rage, but this flower's bloom Was not in vain; it Dies—wilting to gift you its Scent to save your sanity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/24/2023 5:48:00 AM
So interesting, Paige! I could almost see one on the floor in tears as the scent comforts her.
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Date: 5/16/2023 10:12:00 AM
Excellent tanka. Even if the petals are crushed, a flower will still release its fragrance.
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Date: 5/6/2023 7:15:00 PM
Great tanka. A flower will continue to shead its scent even if the petals are smashed.
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