Aftertouch

I loved like a flame with no wind to fight,
still I flickered—just to feel alive.
He never stayed, but always lingered.
The echo outlasts the word.
I reach for what was never mine.
Even ghosts are warmer than silence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Grasso Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 4:40 PM
Congratulations on first place, Becoming Trude! Well done!
trude from the ruins Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 1:59 AM
Thank you so much! I really appreciate the support and kind words ?? – Becoming Trude from the Ruins
Jones Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 12:44 PM
Each line had me intrigued! Great job and congratulations on your top win!
trude from the ruins Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 1:58 AM
That truly made me smile—thank you so much for reading and for the kind words! It means a lot ?? – Becoming Trude from the Ruins
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 11:04 AM
Wow. This is so nice. Congrats on first place
trude from the ruins Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 1:57 AM
Thank you so much! That truly means a lot to me. I'm so glad the poem spoke to you ?? – Becoming Trude from the Ruin
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