Afternoon Storm

Afternoon Storm

Stormy was the afternoon,
And there were rows on rows
Of anxious birds roosting on city wires.

Doves as still as a Hallowe’en moon,
Sparrows like targets at the fair,
Fluffed, feeling prickly in the air.

Thunder burst, and they murmured,
Unmoving in the torrent of rain,
But feeling no pain.

Quiet, quiet, the birds became,
Now glistening drops shown on emerald grass,
A lone calico was seen to pass

When suddenly all flew as if signaled
Signaled by an unseen flag.
Speeding to their respective nests.

The storm had passed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 5:09 AM
If we study the birds they will predict the weather better than the weatherman. This is a lovely poem Sunlite. Sometimes I whistle at twilight and they will answer. : )
Wanter Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Tickled to death to hear from you, Connie, the bird whisperer.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 4:59 AM
Nature coordinates the reaction of everything within its realm, birds included dear, Sunlite! Very conservative and well written my friend!
Wanter Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:58 PM
I'm sure you've seen "birds of a feather" in your gardens. Thank you!
Teagan Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 12:17 AM
Interesting perspective, how the birds ride out the storm! Love this!
Wanter Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:57 PM
They have such inner voices. Thank you!
Turner Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 12:08 AM
Nicely penned Sunlite. In the summer they can pop up at any time and all one can do is hunker down. Left me smiling:)
Wanter Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Thank you! So glad it made you smile.
Sietesantos Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 7:58 PM
A beautiful poem reflective of your superior talent! Now this is a fav for me! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
Wanter Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Oh, Pandita, I am so touched and thank you for faving it.
B. Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 6:39 PM
Such lovely creativity, Sunlite.. An absolute pleasure to read! Warmest wishes to you..
Wanter Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thank you for that nice comment.
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