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Afternoon Storm

Afternoon Storm Stormy was the afternoon, And there were rows on rows Of anxious birds roosting on city wires. Doves as still as a Hallowe’en moon, Sparrows like targets at the fair, Fluffed, feeling prickly in the air. Thunder burst, and they murmured, Unmoving in the torrent of rain, But feeling no pain. Quiet, quiet, the birds became, Now glistening drops shown on emerald grass, A lone calico was seen to pass When suddenly all flew as if signaled Signaled by an unseen flag. Speeding to their respective nests. The storm had passed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/13/2018 5:09:00 AM
If we study the birds they will predict the weather better than the weatherman. This is a lovely poem Sunlite. Sometimes I whistle at twilight and they will answer. : )
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/15/2018 4:59:00 PM
Tickled to death to hear from you, Connie, the bird whisperer.
Date: 7/13/2018 4:59:00 AM
Nature coordinates the reaction of everything within its realm, birds included dear, Sunlite! Very conservative and well written my friend!
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:58:00 PM
I'm sure you've seen "birds of a feather" in your gardens. Thank you!
Date: 7/13/2018 12:17:00 AM
Interesting perspective, how the birds ride out the storm! Love this!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/15/2018 4:57:00 PM
They have such inner voices. Thank you!
Date: 7/13/2018 12:08:00 AM
Nicely penned Sunlite. In the summer they can pop up at any time and all one can do is hunker down. Left me smiling:)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/15/2018 4:56:00 PM
Thank you! So glad it made you smile.
Date: 7/12/2018 7:58:00 PM
A beautiful poem reflective of your superior talent! Now this is a fav for me! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/15/2018 4:54:00 PM
Oh, Pandita, I am so touched and thank you for faving it.
Date: 7/12/2018 6:39:00 PM
Such lovely creativity, Sunlite.. An absolute pleasure to read! Warmest wishes to you..
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 7/15/2018 4:54:00 PM
Thank you for that nice comment.

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