Afternoon Hue

Afternoon hue Denim blue block Of two o'clock 11/25/20

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/1/2021 11:45:00 AM

Very nice imagery. :) Happy New Year! Linda

Fj Thomas

Date: 12/18/2020 7:11:00 AM

Not only good but really like how you format the lines. May try that! Good morning Michelle :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/26/2020 11:31:00 AM

Well done! Aloha! Rico

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/26/2020 8:42:00 AM

Love this.. God bless you and Happy Thanksgiving

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/25/2020 5:52:00 PM

Well-done Than-Bauk, Michelle. These are hard to do, for sure. G.L. in the contest! :) gw

John Watt

Date: 11/25/2020 5:32:00 PM

Very enjoyable Than-Bauk poem, Michelle. A nice depiction of the blue afternoon. I have not tried this form before but you have inspired me to do so. Enjoy your Thanksgiving, my friend ~ John