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AFTERMATH War is final but incomplete, bodies littered like spent ammunition along the ravaged bloody street. But who hears the voices of condemnation on profit-only Wall Street? In the dirt they make their plans to strike again at life and limb but ghostly cries fall on deaf ears. Who, alive, could be so bold to find in such a loss a gain? Better drunk with glory and feel the pain than live a sober life in vain. With rigid form and empty hands the scripted epitaph of modern man lies for all to see in the deeds of young men, yet most turn away ashamed of the savage reality. To a different god they pray but everyone just wants to live free. To those brave warriors downed no small measure of honour found. War is final but incomplete, the aftermath lives on in the faces, the fears and in the broken street; a boil in the hot sun of scrutiny and the children dance in bare feet. Conflict is old and certainly cold, survivors return with stories untold. The epic struggle continues between man’s heart and his powerful greed leaving a wasteland out of Eden. With inner struggles the scars are hidden. War is conflict with no remedy, turns trusted friends into bitter enemies. The dead have one wish, to be alive, to be with loved ones who survive. The aftermath, the chaos, it never ends, on and on the sorrow and grief, these broken lives will never mend. Only death or peace will bring relief.

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Date: 3/30/2017 9:42:00 PM
Phil, this one deserves all the 7s, or as Jesus expressed numberless; "Seventy times seven." Fantabulous writing with memorable lines:"War if final but incomplete." The last line is resigned but hopeful, yet! Thanks much ... for everything, & to dream of Psalm 16, when the Old Testament put a 6 year limit on debt, collections, ... so year 7 was Sabbath forgiveness of debt, literal release of slaves ...I believe Israel & Jews will help up right this dollary ship
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Date: 3/10/2017 9:09:00 AM
Awesomely terrifying.
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Date: 3/4/2017 2:29:00 AM
A great, beautiful poem.
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Date: 3/4/2017 2:02:00 AM
I was deeply moved...
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Phil Capitano
Date: 3/4/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Felicia I'm glad it affected you so. We think war is the end but it is only the beginning of suffering for those left behind. Namaste.
Date: 2/21/2017 6:57:00 PM
Back for second read, even better, number 35 and rising, told you so!
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/22/2017 12:47:00 PM
No, just know good poetry when I see it, hey you should have something for my free verse contest, would do well no doubt!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/22/2017 3:46:00 AM
Thanks so much John....say maybe you might have some winning lotto numbers, too, LMAO.
Date: 2/21/2017 12:48:00 PM
A powerful anti - war ode here! You show the dark side of our - and other - nations clearly in this work Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/22/2017 3:48:00 AM
Thanks Matthew for stopping by, your comments are appreciated. Namaste.
Date: 2/18/2017 2:09:00 PM
Very strong message on the evils of war and its futility. Death and massive destruction always its bitter fruits! Top 7 on this gem. A fav...
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Phil Capitano
Date: 3/4/2017 8:47:00 AM
Thanks kindly for your support.
Date: 2/18/2017 8:33:00 AM
Terrific message, eloquently stated. Good work, amigo.
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Date: 2/17/2017 12:56:00 PM
Wonderful write!
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Date: 2/12/2017 10:55:00 PM
Superbly done my friend...we are always the pawns in the chess game...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 2/11/2017 7:57:00 AM
Hi Phil, Well done. Great title. Very descriptive insightful poem. Keep up the good work. Have a great day. Earl
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/11/2017 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Earl for checking me out, I appreciate the comment.
Date: 2/9/2017 9:18:00 AM
Powerful poem w/even more powerful message, Phil. Very thought provoking poetic art. Ty for sharing. Excellent poem on so many levels. Love and peace.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/9/2017 3:51:00 PM
Thanks buddy, ciao.
Date: 2/9/2017 4:04:00 AM
- A awesome poem, Phil ... you have 100% right in your last line - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/9/2017 4:08:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, have a great day :)
Date: 2/8/2017 12:25:00 PM
Very Very well written x I don't normally like the war poems but you made it very interesting x 10/10 well done x
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/8/2017 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Wendy I tried not to make it too brutal but you know...
Date: 2/7/2017 12:06:00 PM
Excellent write.
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Date: 2/6/2017 2:32:00 PM
Does anyone ever really win a war...wonderful write
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Date: 2/6/2017 1:19:00 PM
Nice write. Memorable and true especially given what's going on today.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/8/2017 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Frank, unfortunately the times change but nothing really changes.
Date: 2/6/2017 11:53:00 AM
Excellent Phil. Very well written :)
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Date: 2/6/2017 11:11:00 AM
wow, wow, wow, Phil, Phil, Phil mesmerizing write of truth, I am awed by the depth of this write, a7 and a definite fave, you certainly have peaked with this one, a sure top ten poem, just wait and see!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/6/2017 4:16:00 PM
Thanks so much John, I hope you are right.

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