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After the Storm

After The Storm Night falls harshly and the door sharply slams on all happiness and each hopeful thought Left with insincere smiles and a million scams A blunt, cruel harshness is now my lot At dawn I awake as angry gusts surge They lurch into gales, harsh storms hades sent Bronze, yellow, and crimson leaves soar and merge Soaring, swirling down to rain-pelted cement Afternoon enters cloudless, balmy and bright Soft breezes fleet by in wafts gentle and warm Now rising, now falling, and buoyant and light In Elysian Fields I settle after the storm The tumult of anguish and bitter despair break away and drift off this glorious night There’s a feel of pending joy in the air as the door flings open and lets in the light Quatrains Written 8/22/22

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Date: 9/29/2022 5:14:00 AM
Love the emotions stirred by this poem! …there’s a fell of pending joy in the air
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Date: 9/2/2022 12:55:00 PM
Robert your ending was spectacular. Your depiction of the storm was wonderfully expressed. I was engaged through each verse. Your words were perfectly crafted as always, and conveyed the nature of the storm. Loved reading another fine work by you. As always your Poetry is impressive to read. Enjoy your weekend Robert and God bless you my friend...
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Date: 8/25/2022 9:35:00 PM
After the storms of life, comes the radiant sunshine. This is beautiful, Robert. :) Evelyn
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 9/13/2022 9:59:00 AM
Glad you found it uplifting Evelyn. Robert
Date: 8/24/2022 3:48:00 PM
what a glorious ending on this one. Awesome, Robert.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 8/24/2022 4:59:00 PM
Honored that you were moved by my narrative. Robert
Date: 8/23/2022 11:05:00 AM
What hope you offer for those in despair. You will get through the storm! I'm faving it! ~Anaya
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 8/24/2022 5:00:00 PM
Thank you I always strive to have a message, real and hopefully healing, Robert
Date: 8/22/2022 9:50:00 PM
A storm and calm day. Great descriptions.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 8/23/2022 10:05:00 AM
Thanks, Victor, for your kind words and welcome visit. Robert
Date: 8/22/2022 7:04:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Robert. May this new day be a good one!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 8/23/2022 10:02:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and for your comment Milt. Keep dry and be well! The news says Kentucky is getting inundated with rain.

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