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Afloat On a Lavender Sea

A cord had been stretched, from our hearts to the moon across foolish years, to a life far beyond It coiled around a chair, down the hall, past the door, that were groomed by the light of a bright afternoon I was floating on the sea of cold hardwood Prone on my back, on a lavender rug Examining the nail of my left-hand thumb with a phone at my ear, and faith in the unknown You had aced your exams, now we were making our plans, only tied to a kiss, by a small ivory phone With a ring on my finger, that would bind foolish hearts, that were blinded by love, without worry or fear Invitations were mailed, a church was on hold There was a cake made to order, and a world unexplored You were glued to my ear, I was wrapped by a thread that tugged on my heart by a long-distance word The light from the yard was scored by the blinds but, there on the floor, our world was sublime I was bound by a cord that tethered all time To a life yet to live, but together we'd find I was linked to your voice, by a young foolish heart While I sailed on a sea to a lavender star ____________________________ Submitted to "My Foolish Heart" contest: Feb-2021 Sponsored by Craig Cornish _______________________________________

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Date: 2/22/2021 12:09:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... and yes, for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/1/2021 6:40:00 PM
Thank you very much Beata. I'm so pleased you liked it :)
Date: 2/21/2021 1:34:00 PM
I can just imagine all the things going through the mind of a young bride to be, Carrie. It's not so much the ring that binds us as a meeting of minds that endures. Beautifully written, dear. So nice to see you here again! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/20/2021 3:24:00 PM
This is truly brilliant. Congratulations Carrie.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 2/20/2021 6:28:00 PM
Such a generous compliment. Thank you very much Gary
Date: 2/20/2021 9:08:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your win in Craig's contest. You have created such a vivid picture of the connection between lovers in conversation. I do love the image of the purple rug!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 2/20/2021 9:43:00 AM
Thank you very much for such a nice comment, Sam!
Date: 2/20/2021 8:40:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your win in Craig's Foolish Heart contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Carrie Richards
Date: 2/20/2021 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Constance. I haven't entered a poem in so long, I almost forgot how !! You are so kind!
Date: 2/20/2021 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "I was linked to your voice, by a young foolish heart." Yes, a young foolish heart. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.................
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Carrie Richards
Date: 2/20/2021 9:44:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paula!
Date: 8/3/2016 5:52:00 PM
congratulations on this walk down memory lane, my guess is you had a rotary phone I know we did..spent many hours saying nothing, yet thought it was everything..
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Date: 8/3/2016 6:55:00 AM
A beautiful private moment you have swept us up into. I was rapt to the end. Congratulations on this fine poem. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 8/2/2016 2:13:00 PM
Oh it's great to see this one Carrie. I believe this is already in my favorites...Congrats
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Date: 8/2/2016 10:43:00 AM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog 'Mistaken Identity.' Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 9/3/2014 7:01:00 AM
This is special! What a vivid tale, I can see it so clear, being as I don't own a cell phone and I am frequently tethered to the wall. You poem is perfectly descriptive, and well deserving of the win. you rock :)
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Date: 8/30/2014 7:38:00 AM
As exclusive as ever Carrie! Very wonderful,, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 8/30/2014 1:33:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:58:00 PM
Absolutely outstanding Carrie....you are going to have to write a new one with face time and all the new social media of the youth of today....hugs Tim
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Date: 8/29/2014 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Date: 8/29/2014 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie xx
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Date: 8/29/2014 11:23:00 AM
Carrie, love the deep imagery, and hold... Congratulations, on your awesome win. A wonderful and sweet poem, True Love, it is!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Enjoy my blog "I'm Standing Behind You" if you like or have the time. Enjoy the coming week. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:10:00 PM
Carrie, congrats, in Charlotte's contest... HUGS
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Date: 11/18/2013 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations carrie
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Date: 11/16/2013 7:51:00 PM
Congrats on the well deserved win. You sweep the reader away in your fine craft. Beautiful :)
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Date: 11/16/2013 6:48:00 PM
I love how you describe that deep connection through a phone line and that feeling of love as if floating on a lavender sea. Congrats, Carrie!
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Date: 11/16/2013 7:49:00 AM
I loved this poem. Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/16/2013 5:43:00 AM
So this was for Charlotte's contest too huh? Number one in her book and mine too...Congrats my friend! - Tim
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Date: 11/15/2013 8:08:00 PM
Wonderful poetry here Carrie:Love it!
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Date: 11/15/2013 7:24:00 PM
ahhh the rhythm and the rhyme of it! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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