Afloat On a Lavender Sea

A cord had been stretched, from our hearts to the moon
across foolish years, to a life far beyond
It coiled around a chair, down the hall, past the door,
that were groomed by the light of a bright afternoon

I was floating on the sea of cold hardwood 
Prone on my back, on a lavender rug
Examining the nail of my left-hand thumb
with a phone at my ear, and faith in the unknown

You had aced your exams, now we were making our plans, 
only tied to a kiss, by a small ivory phone
With a ring on my finger, that would bind foolish hearts,
that were blinded by love, without worry or fear
 
Invitations were mailed, a church was on hold
There was a cake made to order, and a world unexplored  
You were glued to my ear, I was wrapped by a thread
that tugged on my heart by a long-distance word

The light from the yard was scored by the blinds
but, there on the floor, our world was sublime
I was bound by a cord that tethered all time
To a life yet to live, but together we'd find

I was linked to your voice, by a young foolish heart
While I sailed on a sea to a lavender star



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Submitted to "My Foolish Heart" contest: Feb-2021
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Agustin Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 12:09 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... and yes, for sharing your talent. God bless you.
Richards Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 6:40 PM
Thank you very much Beata. I'm so pleased you liked it :)
Devonshire Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 1:34 PM
I can just imagine all the things going through the mind of a young bride to be, Carrie. It's not so much the ring that binds us as a meeting of minds that endures. Beautifully written, dear. So nice to see you here again! Hugs, Carolyn
Radice Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 3:24 PM
This is truly brilliant. Congratulations Carrie.
Richards Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 6:28 PM
Such a generous compliment. Thank you very much Gary
Kauffman Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 9:08 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your win in Craig's contest. You have created such a vivid picture of the connection between lovers in conversation. I do love the image of the purple rug!
Richards Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Thank you very much for such a nice comment, Sam!
La France Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your win in Craig's Foolish Heart contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
Richards Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Thank you Constance. I haven't entered a poem in so long, I almost forgot how !! You are so kind!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "I was linked to your voice, by a young foolish heart." Yes, a young foolish heart. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.................
Richards Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 9:44 AM
Thanks so much, Paula!
Parker Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 5:52 PM
congratulations on this walk down memory lane, my guess is you had a rotary phone I know we did..spent many hours saying nothing, yet thought it was everything..
Delaney Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 6:55 AM
A beautiful private moment you have swept us up into. I was rapt to the end. Congratulations on this fine poem. Hugs, SuZ
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 2:13 PM
Oh it's great to see this one Carrie. I believe this is already in my favorites...Congrats
A  Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 10:43 AM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog 'Mistaken Identity.' Forever **SKAT**
Nance Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 7:01 AM
This is special! What a vivid tale, I can see it so clear, being as I don't own a cell phone and I am frequently tethered to the wall. You poem is perfectly descriptive, and well deserving of the win. you rock :)
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 7:38 AM
As exclusive as ever Carrie! Very wonderful,, congrats on huge win!
Mehta Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:33 AM
Congrats on the win, Carrie
Smith Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 8:58 PM
Absolutely outstanding Carrie....you are going to have to write a new one with face time and all the new social media of the youth of today....hugs Tim
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:49 PM
Congratulations Carrie I enjoyed reading your poem.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 5:38 PM
Congratulations Carrie xx
A   Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Carrie, love the deep imagery, and hold... Congratulations, on your awesome win. A wonderful and sweet poem, True Love, it is!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Enjoy my blog "I'm Standing Behind You" if you like or have the time. Enjoy the coming week. LOVE LINDA
A   Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 8:10 PM
Carrie, congrats, in Charlotte's contest... HUGS
Jones Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 6:15 PM
Congratulations carrie
Anglesey Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 7:51 PM
Congrats on the well deserved win. You sweep the reader away in your fine craft. Beautiful :)
Ligon Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 6:48 PM
I love how you describe that deep connection through a phone line and that feeling of love as if floating on a lavender sea. Congrats, Carrie!
Horsch Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 7:49 AM
I loved this poem. Congrats on your win
Ryerson Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 5:43 AM
So this was for Charlotte's contest too huh? Number one in her book and mine too...Congrats my friend! - Tim
Poet Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 8:08 PM
Wonderful poetry here Carrie:Love it!
Guzzi Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 7:24 PM
ahhh the rhythm and the rhyme of it! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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