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Affirmation

Warm breath on shoulder her nails tease my nape Lost in our movement connected in shape we dance together Heart beats faster smile on my face she’s beautiful ornate in lace Our eyes meet one soft kiss I’m smitten Perfume Subtle Yes Diminished Hexaverse Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger How many syllables 5x5/4x4/3x3/2x2/1 06/10/22

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/22/2022 7:41:00 AM

Soft and sweet David. Perfect form. Congratulations on your win! Linda

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/22/2022 8:28:00 AM

Thank you Linda, A little romantic one, I enjoyed putting it together, brought back a few great memories, cheers David

Eve Roper

Date: 7/13/2022 2:14:00 PM

Big congratulations, David , to a romantic verse. Blessings

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/13/2022 2:32:00 PM

Heya Eve, thank you for stopping by, I’m delighted when the placement, cheers David

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/12/2022 5:33:00 PM

I remember loving this one David. I am happy to see it on the winners list. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/13/2022 12:25:00 AM

Heya Connie, thank you for stopping by again, I was delighted to get this one acknowledged in the contest, hope your keeping well, cheers David

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/11/2022 1:34:00 PM

So tenderly romantic David - every emotive emotion on display here. Your words capture those lovely feelings that capture us! Congratulations! Cheers!

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/11/2022 1:46:00 PM

Great to hear from you Sam, it’s absolutely amazing how we never forget our coming of age years, really is a magical time, cheers David

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/11/2022 2:46:00 PM

Anyone who has ever been in love remembers the blissful feeling of it. You have captured that feeling in this poem David. Lovely! I hope this is a top winner. Blessings xxoo

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/12/2022 1:01:00 AM

Heya Connie, some good feelings stay with us forever, and are just as potent, or even more so than the bad ones, thank you for kind words, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/10/2022 3:23:00 PM

Your "Affirmation" is a wonderful write. Good Luck. You are so right, mine is very different. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/10/2022 3:41:00 PM

Thank you Paula, I’m normally the dark one, just my style, but I need a little timeout every now and then, have a great weekend, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/10/2022 1:12:00 PM

Full of romance and passion, you're showing your romantic side David. Best of luck and enjoy your weekend. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/10/2022 1:28:00 PM

Lol, many moons ago

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/10/2022 1:21:00 PM

Thank you Tom, I know you remember those dance nights too, all the guys acting tough, then he melts like an ice lolly in her arms, right back at you, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 6/10/2022 1:05:00 PM

purring like a kitten. Romance on your mind, David. Sweet write.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/10/2022 1:18:00 PM

I know, smitten like a kitten, the female of the species knows all the tricks to break down our tough exterior, it ain’t fair lol, cheers David