Adam

mellow is his smile pushing swing high to the sky~ mockingbirds singing 6/27/2022

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I Am Anaya

Date: 7/1/2022 8:22:00 PM

I see Adam enjoying riding the swing as the bird's chirp in his surroundings. What makes for a precious day! Lovely Eve.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/1/2022 10:35:00 AM

I love our mockingbirds - they perch back in the trees around our feeders and mock the song birds. They are quite comical, and so persuasive! Nice senryu Eve! Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/28/2022 2:41:00 AM

Ahhh!! Reads like a fun time for someone. I enjoyed reading this one and picturing that little one enjoying a swing. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/27/2022 8:05:00 AM

A well written piece Eve little mystical much is behind the lines

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/27/2022 7:31:00 AM

lovely Haiku. Their tail is particularly long during flight. Hugs

Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2022 7:42:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad, yes they are, but their songs are all different and I try to mock.. hugs my friend

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/27/2022 1:01:00 AM

Do you have a lot of mocking birds around. I've never seen one. Mainly sparrows. Hugs.

Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2022 7:35:00 AM

Yes we do, they fill the air with song. The oak tree I posted on Facebook , it is always used as their stage. They also use my front and back porch to perch. I enjoy their music.. silly me tries to mock them.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/27/2022 12:41:00 AM

Awesome, Eve..how very original! Making this a fave. I never would have thought of it. Wowser of a poem. Hugs, Panagiota xxx

Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2022 7:39:00 AM

Thank you, Pangie. My oak tree sits in front of my house and I have a Nest Saucer Web Swing hanging off a limb. My grandson that will be 4 in August loves to swing on it, so of course I am constantly pushing the swing. Those small birds are all over my area, so they love to sing.