Ache

An ache can come in many forms, my feet would ache from standing-working nine hours. Many have an ache from words, cruel and hurtful not needed to be said. My mouth bled and ached, when my wisdom teeth were pulled. After a baby is born you have tears of joy, with a huge body ache. When you lose a loved one you ache, your heart is broken into a million pieces. Life is filled with many kinds of aches, they come in all sizes and shapes. Date Written: 4/23/2021 2 Place Writing Prompt - Ache - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/3/2021 10:18:00 AM

Great!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2021 8:31:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day.................

Constance La France

Date: 4/28/2021 8:31:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt -Ache- Challenge with your wonderful Free verse poem, one of your best for me so far, well done, love _Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/28/2021 9:00:00 AM

Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your kind words. It is an honor to have a win in your contest. Glad you like this ache write. I want to write better. I am still trying. Have a blessed day.................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2021 4:20:00 PM

I like how you described the many kinds of ache. It's so true, we all have at least one type or another. Great job, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/25/2021 10:54:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like my write. Yes, too many aches in life. Have a blessed day.................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/24/2021 11:34:00 AM

Hello Paula, right you are. Life does have its aches and pains. There is also happiness that comes along to. But first we must get over the pain. Blessings.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/26/2021 11:57:00 AM

Hello Paula, yes getting over the hurt does take time. Enjoy your day my friend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/25/2021 10:51:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this write. Getting over the pain is sometimes hard to do. Have a blessed day....................

Janine Lever

Date: 4/24/2021 11:19:00 AM

I like this poem paula, it draws one in to the life aches that many of us have felt. thank you for your poem.xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/25/2021 10:50:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day.................

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/23/2021 4:34:00 PM

Like my daddy used to say, "it'll feel better when it quits hurting". LOL Good luck. Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/25/2021 10:48:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your good luck. Yes, your daddy was right. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day...............

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/23/2021 3:32:00 PM

I believe that aches can be found all over and nothing is worth the heartache; I wish you good luck in the contest, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/25/2021 10:47:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your good luck. Yes, aches can be found all over and more with age. Glad you like my write about aches. Have a blessed day...............

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/23/2021 2:01:00 PM

Too right, aches come in many forms, I ache in my arms, legs, heart and shoulder, I guess one could say I’m aching all over... it’s a fantastic write Paula ~ Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/25/2021 10:45:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Sorry you have aches all over. Age can do that. Glad you like my write about aches. Have a blessed day...............

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/23/2021 11:49:00 AM

Aches can come in many forms, I pray you don't get lost in them, praying you into healthy today, Have a great day Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/23/2021 1:14:00 PM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Yes, aches can come in many forms. Thank You, for your prayers. I will not get lost in the aches of life/world. Have a blessed day/weekend with a hug...............