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Six of them stare at me accusingly unblinking, motionless, all in a line, their silence since their sentence came to be bears witness to them, victims of a crime. Pointless for me to offer a defence, I swear I had no hand in their demise, my only part I played to bear them hence, the last person to gaze into those eyes. Their lives cut short with others in a throng, no calls for mercy, screams of fear or pain, not punishment, for they had done no wrong, a necessary loss for mankind's gain. I know that it will be a while till when I eat some sardines from a tin again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/8/2018 6:28:00 PM
That is totally adorable, Viv. Wonderful twist. I knew there was a good reason I didn't eat sardines. Superbly done.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/11/2018 12:44:00 AM
Thanks, Line, the same reason I can't understand anyone eating 'Stargazy pie'- look it up. Horrible. regards, Viv
Date: 2/8/2018 4:55:00 PM
I kept reading eager to find out who is accusing you of what. Loved the twist, thanks for the smile.
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Date: 2/11/2018 12:44:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, poetry inspiration comes from the strangest things, eh ? Viv x
Date: 2/8/2018 10:01:00 AM
ha ha ha great humour Mr Viv this really made me giggle and its fun to see a witty sonnet I'm sure Shakespeare would approve:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/11/2018 12:45:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. Back to Mackerel I go.... Viv x
Date: 2/8/2018 6:47:00 AM
well it works vic, i was off somewhere to the gallows. then the twist, awesome poetry and clever too.
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Date: 2/11/2018 12:45:00 AM
Thanks Harry, glad you enjoyed it. Regards, Viv
Date: 2/8/2018 4:37:00 AM
I take it, it is about eating sardines... lol... Deep poem in fact, rather than humorous.. A great flowing sonnet Viv....
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Date: 2/11/2018 12:46:00 AM
Indeedy, Silent One, now I remember why I don't eat them too often. Regards, Viv

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