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Abuse

A breathless realization— A piercing pain to the heart, To the gut— Low moaning in an Utterance of disbelief Infiltrates the body's senses. Smoke billows, yet there is no fire, Just an opaque veil that’s slowly lifted From sorrowful eyes Where flooding begins. Deeds made bare Requires reprehensible restraint. As anger flushes furiously, A fire rages out of control— Searing, scorching, killing trust, Destroying any semblance of caring. A glacial numbness replaces fire— Then—a drowning in the melt. © Connie Marcum Wong

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Heather Ober

Date: 11/10/2015 10:37:00 AM

Oh, WOW. A shiver went down my spine as I read this one. "Smoke billows, yet there is no fire" - that line is so powerful. And the last line is just PERFECT. A fav for me.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/14/2015 11:45:00 PM

So many in this world are abused of both sexes. Thank you so much for fav'ing this. I appreciate your thoughtful kind comments Heather.Blessings, Connie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/30/2015 9:17:00 AM

Powerful write Connie. A difficult topic.

Hannington Mumo

Date: 10/29/2015 5:02:00 AM

A well-written piece on the subject of pain and suffering. It captures the morbid details of torture and travail with rare poetic vividness. #7!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/14/2015 11:46:00 PM

Thank you very much Hannington. There are too many in this world who suffer abuse and I am deeply touched by it. Blessings, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2015 8:17:00 PM

Just here to say goodnight and thanks for seeing my poem tonight , dear. I feel good having accomplished a lot this weekend and now is time to make dinner and see tv!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/11/2015 3:01:00 PM

Connie, you have penned such a powerful and descriptive write. I was moved by the intensity if this write. Excellent job!:-)Alexis 7

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/11/2015 6:30:00 AM

Fantastic write! So descriptive...you put the reader in the middle of the feelings.

Elaine George

Date: 10/10/2015 5:09:00 PM

Destroying any semblance of caring. A glacial numbness replaces fire. This hit home for me. Powerful writing, Connie.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/10/2015 9:46:00 AM

Hi Connie: You really personified abuse to a different realm. Great Write!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/9/2015 6:02:00 PM

Hello Connie... this poem is great Connie for you explain so well a subject that destroys the inner soul - thanks Connie - Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2015 3:46:00 PM

wow, Connie, a drowning in the melt. What an outstanding final line for this very descriptive writing on abuse. GREAT job!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2015 3:46:00 PM

funny story about YOUR boy toy. hahaha

Paul Callus

Date: 10/9/2015 1:37:00 PM

This is very expressive, Connie. Abuse comes in different forms, and it is always ends in pain and sadness. Unfortunately many are those who have to live with it. #7 Hugs // paul

Daver Austin

Date: 10/9/2015 11:02:00 AM

Yes. I believe there is no understanding abuse by a normal person. Your last line sums it up.