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Above gray clouds, I swing in light Through changes daylight brings to night I hear your voice, it comforts me In blindness where I cannot see Sometimes the best waits out of sight The soft clouds cleanse me, colored white Smoothly I swing, things are made right Accepting loss, letting it be Above gray clouds Some people judge, I say, “not quite” Unless you have taken this flight Below me is the pain I flee, Tears in puddles, so I am free To swing and swing, to gather might Above gray clouds Heidi Sands 8/12/18 Placed 1st in the Rondeau Contest. Photo 1.

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Date: 9/5/2018 1:08:00 AM
Beautifully written :) I loved that !
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/5/2018 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Maxie. I am happy you loved this :)
Date: 8/31/2018 10:41:00 AM
Wow, terrific write Heidi, congratulations...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/31/2018 10:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Charlie :)
Date: 8/31/2018 1:04:00 AM
I love this entry Heidi! You deserve your wonderful placement. Congratulations! : )
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/31/2018 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Connie :)
Date: 8/30/2018 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautifully written. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/31/2018 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 8/30/2018 3:04:00 PM
Beautiful piece. Congrats on your well deserved win..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2018 3:09:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your kind comment. :)
Date: 8/29/2018 3:55:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara..Kind of sad. I feel it is about depression.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2018 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Sara.! I appreciate your support :)
Date: 8/28/2018 11:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Heidi on your with this beautiful poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2018 7:06:00 AM
Thank you Subimal :)
Date: 8/28/2018 6:30:00 PM
Back to Congrats!!! my beautiful poetic friend...way to go Heidi...#1...yahoo!!!...should have been at the very top though...Love & light...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/28/2018 6:47:00 PM
Thank you so much WW!! I appreciate all your support :)
Date: 8/28/2018 6:15:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/28/2018 6:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Janice :)
Date: 8/28/2018 6:05:00 PM
Above gray clouds in freedom's flight..Congrats on your win Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/28/2018 6:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph. I appreciate the opportunity to be in the contest :)
Date: 8/20/2018 9:58:00 AM
You have a good abstract eye and the heart and soul of a poet. We enter a world composed of reality defused with imagination where mysteries and emotions abound. Emile.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/20/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thank you very much Emile :)
Date: 8/13/2018 7:20:00 PM
Above and beyond poetic beauty, my friend...me likes...love & light...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2018 8:02:00 AM
Thank you WW! I appreciate your visit and comment :)
Date: 8/13/2018 5:58:00 PM
Delightful writing , heavenly sentiments and so inspiring dear, Heidi! Good luck!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios! :)
Date: 8/13/2018 1:01:00 PM
Lovely Rondeau, Heidi, good luck! Viv x
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2018 4:54:00 PM
Thank you Viv :)
Date: 8/12/2018 6:42:00 PM
how eloquent in its poignancy, heidi... i was touched!...huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2018 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Nette :)
Date: 8/12/2018 3:31:00 PM
Wonderful work Heidi, best wishes...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Charlie. It is great to see your kind comment :)
Date: 8/12/2018 1:03:00 PM
A place that at times we all long to be. Great verse Heidi. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Tom :)
Date: 8/12/2018 12:26:00 PM
An absolute beautiful rondeau, Heidi.. Your words flow so wonderfully! Really enjoyed your rare gem!! Many Blessings, my friend..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Robertina. I am happy to hear you enjoyed it :)
Date: 8/12/2018 10:56:00 AM
Very pretty rondeau, Heidi. Nice write indeed.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2018 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Dale. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 8/12/2018 9:54:00 AM
the rhyme and flow of the poem are superb Heidi:-) a joy to read, into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2018 11:18:00 AM
I am happy to hear that. Thanks so much Jan :) Have a great day.
Date: 8/12/2018 9:17:00 AM
Just lovely
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Tim :)

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