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Abode of the Great Spirit known as Crater Lake, Native American's seeking a vision- this trail take; gazing into the gem blue lake with a deep ache, cradled by towering cliffs and ancient pines- it rests. In tangled pine branches there are spotted owl nests, on the cliff rim many warriors have preformed their quests; of great courage- that forever dwell in their breasts, and in my dream, I wish, wish for this place of deep blue. Where the sky and water merge for a dazzling view, and to a summer scene this Ojibwe girl's spirit soared and flew; standing in awe of the intense blue and trees that grew, from a sleeping volcano- that erupted thousand of years ago. And in my dream I take a dip in the blue, blue lake till I shake, this scenic park in summer or winter must inspire all guests; for I am so overwhelmed by the beauty that I feel brand new, oh, imagine a lake created only by rain and melting snow. _________________________ January 1, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Abode of the Great Spirits Copyright Protected, ID 19-1100-141-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Sleeping Volcano Sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 1/25/2019 5:57:00 PM
Congratulations great Job
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:55:00 PM
You have described its beauty stunningly Constance. Congratulations on your first placement! : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2019 3:16:00 PM
Connie, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations ~
Date: 1/23/2019 3:39:00 PM
Dear Heart, you created what I was looking for, a poem with great imagery and feeling. I'm glad you also made a place for the spotted owl . Thank you so much for entering my contest. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2019 3:17:00 PM
Eve, thank you for the contest and for my great placement ~
Date: 1/1/2019 4:50:00 PM
Hi Friends, my first poem for 2019. Hope Eve likes it. The first of many to come, my muse is alive and well and oh so many contests that inspire me and so many thoughts are swirling in my head. Time is the only thing holding me back, must develop a writing schedule.(New Years Resolution #4). Happy New Year All.
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