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Ablaze In Firethorns

Chilled, I whispered his name on this frosty morning dawning found me shivering on my side of the bed I always dread waking to the absense of his touch How much I miss comforting warmth of loving arms Icy cold were the sheets where he used to sleep Weep at the sight, unrumpled on his side of the bed The pillow where he laid his head beckoned me in plea. I pressed it to my cheek and shared my tears His woolen socks on my feet, a remnant I had to keep Sweeping light peeked in through the window shade, afraid a mirror will paint my eyes swollen in sullen red. Dead is a marriage when one sleeps alone in the bed ~ ~ ~ How painful had been the sadness of my leaving grieving with each step I had been slowly taking. Aching from the firethorns blazing in my chest then a behest I could not ignore; a glance his way Felt piercing cuts, as though I walked on broken glass Alas, his cry of sorrow made me stop and frown. Down the path he came to me. He spoke not a word but I heard in his final kiss, the things he meant to say I prayed in that moment for the strength to walk away To stay would make a mockery of what once was love. Above, the sky grew dark, a cold rain began to fall, a squall to match the storm, borne within my heart May 12th, 2017

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Date: 5/16/2017 1:15:00 AM
This is a painful poem, Lin, writing it must have been even more so:( congratulations on your well deserved win, a 10:) love the way you carried over the last word rhymes to the next line:)
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Date: 5/16/2017 6:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jo. The rhyme scheme was an afterthought. thanks for noticing. Your encouragement is appreciated.
Date: 5/15/2017 3:38:00 PM
Painfully sad, but so beautifully written, Lin. Congrats on your well-deserved stand-alone First Place win! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/15/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra. It was written with a heavy heart, but I got through it. Hugs back to you.
Date: 5/14/2017 12:16:00 PM
beautiful poem. You paint a beautiful picture with words.
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Date: 5/14/2017 6:34:00 PM
Thank you, Arnie. I'm glad you stopped in to comment.
Date: 5/14/2017 9:15:00 AM
many many many congrats on your top spot Lin I Knew this was a winner from the moment I read it!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2017 9:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Jan. You're always so encouraging. Hugs!
Date: 5/14/2017 5:32:00 AM
This is amazing and oh how it tugs at your heart! Beautifully written and congrats on your top finish.
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Date: 5/14/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thank you very much, Brian. I left you a comment on your winning write..congratulations.
Date: 5/14/2017 1:14:00 AM
This blows me away Lin. So beautiful. Free Verse, but what you said to me once, I say to you now: wonderful and intricate internal rhyme. Congratulations on top win!
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Date: 5/14/2017 9:12:00 AM
I appreciate your sentiments, Darren, and thank you for returning the favor of noticing the rhyme scheme.
Date: 5/13/2017 10:59:00 PM
Wow...this is just wonderful Lin! I love the internal rhyme and how smoothly your lines flow from line to line and from stanza to stanza. You captured the loss in such an original creative way! Congratulations on a well-deserved first place Lin.7 ; )
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Date: 5/14/2017 9:11:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Connie. Your kind comments are so wonderful to read. This one was hard to write, and I had to walk away in the middle of it.
Date: 5/13/2017 10:13:00 PM
congratulations on your win, a heart wrenching picture you painted
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Date: 5/14/2017 9:10:00 AM
Thank you, Frederic. It was painted from memory...sad ones.
Date: 5/13/2017 9:45:00 PM
Sad one Lin and a very unique rhyme scheme. Very well done.
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Date: 5/14/2017 9:10:00 AM
Thank you very much, James, for the comment and for noticing the rhyme scheme. I just read your great poem for this one. It's fantastic.
Date: 5/13/2017 6:26:00 PM
I'll hand you one of my tears Lin if that helps...Congrats on first place my friend...hope all is well...all the best...^WW^
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Date: 5/14/2017 9:09:00 AM
I just read your poem for the contest, ^WW^. We'll share our tears. Thank you very much, and all is well.
Date: 5/13/2017 5:45:00 PM
Congratulations Lin on a great poem, really touching. A stand alone first place!
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Date: 5/14/2017 9:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, John. I'm honored with the placement.
Date: 5/13/2017 3:36:00 PM
Sad dear poet
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/14/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thank you for your empathy, Truth-Teller.
Date: 5/13/2017 8:17:00 AM
Wasn't it Shakespeare who said,"Parting is such sweet sorrow" A very sad poem, Lin. Nice to see you again:)
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Date: 5/13/2017 8:43:00 AM
It was Shakespeare and it's from Romeo and Juliet. I fail to see anything sweet about sorrow of any sort. Tis a very sad poem, Danny. Thanks for reading me and the 'sweet' comments. Nice to see you as well, and hope that you're doing ever so much better. Hugs.
Date: 5/12/2017 12:44:00 PM
Heartache and pain pour from every line lin. I am so lucky not to have suffered a break up of a relationship as painful as this but I know there will be many who can relate:-( hugs Jan xx 7
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/12/2017 1:02:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I'm glad that you've never felt that kind of pain.
Date: 5/12/2017 10:42:00 AM
Achingly beautiful Lin...it is a scene I have lived. I better go cut some onions.
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Date: 5/12/2017 1:00:00 PM
Then you and l share the same heartbreak, Tim. It's a true story. Thank you, dear friend.

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