Ablaze

as stillness awaits the opening of flowers... dawn explodes, ablaze in white of winter... roots struggle to awaken buds touching heaven Contest 230: Brian Strand

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Francis J Grasso

Date: 10/31/2016 9:24:00 AM

Beautiful, Natte! Congratulations! ...Fran

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/11/2013 8:25:00 PM

Beautiful!! Congrats, Nette! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/9/2013 10:50:00 AM

wonderful win Nettev

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/8/2013 6:17:00 PM

A beautiful image, Nette! Congrats on your HM! Love, Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 11/8/2013 8:29:00 AM

Very nice Nette!Congrats on the win.

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2013 11:10:00 PM

wonderful senryu.....love SKAT

John Posey

Date: 11/7/2013 7:31:00 PM

Glad to see you made the list.... Great write.... Congratulations ... Jake

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/7/2013 3:55:00 PM

Once again you have struck gold in just three lines Nette...'Dawn explodes'...Perfect! - Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2013 3:44:00 PM

Gorgeous one, Nette!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/11/2013 10:30:00 AM

Such a beauty in the imagery view in my mind..Lovely senryu.Im going to miss not talking to you on drake s show sunday but i will hear you through archive dear

Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2013 7:34:00 AM

A very powerful poem which exudes wondrous & beauty. Soo love it my dearest friend Nette! Well, how are you? I'm so excited with your next show on our friend Drake's. How I wish I can listen to you this time. My only problem here is the low speed internet 'cuz i'm using aircard. The school wifi isn't accessible in my room only the swimming pool ;))). Well, I am extending my biggest hearty congrats again my dear Nette! Always so proud of u! Big hugs & good luck again. love much, Leonora

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/9/2013 9:10:00 PM

I enjoyed the metaphors and similes creating a pleasing picture, nette. and thank you for my placement in your contest.

Kash Poet

Date: 10/9/2013 8:24:00 PM

Lovely imagery in this Senryu Nette.Enjoyed the read.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/9/2013 6:09:00 PM

A golden verse and nothing less!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/9/2013 4:51:00 PM

Beautiful poem. Thankk you so much..... Lucilla

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/9/2013 4:49:00 PM

what a gorgeous image in this piece...nicely penned Nette :) hugs

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/9/2013 4:18:00 PM

This is an utterly wonderful and enlightening write my friend! You have described a striking and fascinating scene here Nette! I can just picture this developing right before me! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2013 3:29:00 PM

Very descriptive work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading it today...I enjoy looking at flowers that are either effected by the rising sun or of the setting sun to open to flower..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara