Sara Kendrick Poet Pantoum

Abele Trees In Autumn

Above the lake abele trees are golden
Now that autumn has reached its pinnacle
Two muted swans surrounded by reflective color
Snowy white swans face longing for each other


Now that autumn has reached its pinnacle
The lake reflects gold and red like miracles
Snowy white swans face longing for each other
Knowing winter is coming with its bother

Now that autumn has reached its pinnacle
Two muted swans surrounded by reflective color
Knowing winter is coming with its bother
Above the lake abele trees are golden

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 9, 2009 at 10:10 AM Sara,it is Sunday afternoon here and I am so happy to share this time reading your fantastic poetry. Love, Carol

James Fraser August 9, 2009 at 5:50 AM Beautiful poem Sara, a delight to read>>James

Jen H. August 8, 2009 at 7:00 PM Superb, write. Each line conveying something a little different from the time before. Thanks for commenting on my poetry, hope to read more from you. ~Jen~

John Freeman August 8, 2009 at 5:44 PM Beautiful flow, form, and subject, I could see the two beautiful swans stand up in the water flapping their wings, facing each other. beautiful picture. God bless Moses

James Marshall Goff August 8, 2009 at 5:15 PM Sara, just wanted to say thank you so much for supporting my poetry! I admire your work immensely, such as your posting above! you have a beautiful heart! james

Barbara Gorelick August 8, 2009 at 2:21 PM This is a very beautiful poem. Im not familiar with this form but will look it up. And what an abele tree is...Good work. Barbara

James Marshall Goff August 8, 2009 at 2:21 PM this form is complicated, you make it look like a day at the lake! really beautiful! Sara, and thanks for your support! jim