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Abandoned Decaying House

I walk into the abandoned decaying house I was born; thought about knocking, then laughed realizing no one would be in. For so long I wondered what it looked like. I couldn't leave until I did. At that moment lull emotions of hopefulness rushed over against the cold darkness. What fond memories of my family brought up on by a thought, a song, or scent. I set foot inside and smell the musty dust odor. The room was dark with little sunshine coming in from the front window and collapsing roof. I reach and move my fingers over the flower rosette carved into the oak staircase railing, the same as on the door frames. Passing through in the silence you could hear the echo whispers of the past. I walk toward the backdoor, onto the back porch of the kitchen. Out towards the back yard I see ferns and ivy choking and moving away from an old grape arbor. On the highest out stretched bough of the gnarly old tree grasp the fraying rope and aged tire swing I use to swing on. No sign of our garden. The gentle breeze blows around, bees, butterflies, and birds still grace the presence of this old home. 7/17/2020 Decaying House Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France porch, ferns, roof, rosette, staircase, window, garden, house, door, whispers

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Date: 7/27/2020 4:29:00 AM
This is such a heartwarming muse Eve. A fave for me. I could feel memories of my old house rushing with fragrance of love. Congratulations on your win my friend. Much love :)
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Date: 7/25/2020 9:21:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my decaying house contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 7/23/2020 12:04:00 PM
Hello Eve mam, Superb imagery.Sad beginning~There is sorrow behind the laugh. Loved the middle stanza ..too intriguing~"flower rosette carved into the oak staircase railing".... Congratulations on your deserving win:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring.Much love:-)
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Date: 7/22/2020 4:59:00 PM
It is sad to see a once beloved home in ruins. I felt that way when I visited my great grand parents once lovely home now in ruins. Congratulations on your deserving First place with this wonderful entry Eve. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/22/2020 4:01:00 PM
A telling homespun write, Eve, visually entertaining I must say and a well-earned first place win my friend -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/19/2020 9:42:00 PM
Your prose has such yearning, Eve. You took a courageous look into reality with eyes of the past. Wonderful storytelling drawing us into your childhood and your journey. Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings my friend.
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:07:00 PM
such vivid imagery Eve you are an excellent story teller, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/18/2020 4:27:00 AM
Enjoyed your verse Eve, so many memories surface. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 7/17/2020 8:46:00 PM
Nice prose, felt I was there.
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