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A Witch Story

Green was her face and ebon her hair, features young, body withered sinew. Her enormous eyes gave me a scare. And, from one nostril, a ruby grew. I stayed behind the large, surging crowd, who drank her brew then made eerie sounds. I was Press and we were not allowed to view what happens on witching grounds. Evil story would ensure glory; not prepared for unheavenly ride. A black gale blew, thickened by gory. With it, black cats, ravens to her side. Undead emerged shedding dirt--a fright. With wrinkled hand, she stroked ugly doll. Snakes sliding from ears, she rose in night. So scared was I--wrote nothing at all. October 17, 2022 for "12-16 Lines of a Scary Halloween Rhyme"Contest by Tania Kitchen howmanysyllables.con=9 Rhyme, abab

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Date: 11/1/2022 12:29:00 PM
Ann, wonderfully creative Halloween story for the Witches Gazette! Any editor would print this in a witches moment never mind that witch's elbow! Congratulations on your win. This is an amazing creation from that Halloween place in your muse's mind! Love the last line! Perfect! That witch must have put a spell on your pen. Blessings!
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Date: 10/31/2022 7:12:00 AM
Love this Ann. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 10/31/2022 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Ann. A perfect spooky Halloween poem.
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Date: 10/31/2022 1:52:00 AM
Fantastic spooky images, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/30/2022 4:45:00 PM
Hmm… if only all journalists would write nothing… the world would be a far finer place, even on Halloween. Congrats on your win, Ann. Terry
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/31/2022 5:13:00 PM
That's the absolute truth, Terry! Yet we continued to read them. Figure that out!
Date: 10/30/2022 4:20:00 PM
Ann, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky poem, great rhyme scheme too!
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Date: 11/3/2022 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tania! It was a fun contest.
Date: 10/30/2022 12:24:00 PM
Anne, This read so silky smooth. Sounded and felt as if I were there. Thx for the creepy words, suzanne
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Date: 10/18/2022 4:20:00 PM
This was creepy in the best way, I like the image of the ruby growing from her green nose and the 'unheavenly ride' line gave me shivers!
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/19/2022 4:24:00 PM
HaHa! I liked that ruby, too.
Date: 10/18/2022 11:14:00 AM
Didn't belong in a cemetery? We ALL "belong" there, some sooner than later! Aloha!
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/18/2022 11:38:00 AM
Oui, I just wasn't ready! A full-moon night and the 5 of us were walking to the exit gate. A car drove up--guy and girl--saw us, spun out of there doing 90 at least! :) I really did feel like an intruder, tho.
Date: 10/17/2022 8:33:00 PM
Ann, great Halloween story. I always wonder how a cemetery is at night. Many blessings my friend
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/18/2022 10:57:00 AM
I've been to one long ago with friends. We were trying to capture a ghost's voice on tape. My feeling the entire time was that we didn't belong there...we were intruding Thanks for your comments and blessings.

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