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A Winter Sonata Of Love

Dance me to the moon on a wintry day of snow and glistening light Hold me in your arms and make me swoon like love does on a winter tide Beneath a parapet of stars where baby deer do scamper without fright, sway me like a leaf on a branch when pirouetting winds arrive; Lacey touch soft as velvet on my shoulders fair, draw me closer to your breast keep me warm inside the winds of this candy cane December. Set my heart aglow dance me to the end of me, then twirl me round and round like a fancy carrousel I will be your wintry moon, and you can be my savant star.

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Date: 12/29/2023 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A beautiful/romantic write/lovely ending. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
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Date: 12/29/2023 11:27:00 AM
Thank you for letting me know I'm thrilled about it Paula, xo
Date: 12/7/2023 3:13:00 AM
Dear, this is so beautiful... Congratulations...
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Date: 12/5/2023 10:52:00 AM
Beautiful poetry.." Lacey touch soft as velvet on my shoulders fair, draw me closer to your breast keep me warm inside the winds of this candy cane December" I'm immersed in your words. Congratulations on the poem of the day, Mystic Rose! hugs~Anaya
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Date: 12/4/2023 8:15:00 PM
Oozing with romance Vie, congrats on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 12/4/2023 6:48:00 PM
May you continue to "twirl round and round, like a fancy carousel" my dear friend. This time of year holds beauty, along with many magical moments. The images you paint leave me in complete awe. So festive and romantic. Congratulations Vienna, of Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/4/2023 1:50:00 PM
Many congratulations dear Rose for this lovely POTD. The imagery you carved with your words is truly magnificent. God Bless, Nancy
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Date: 12/4/2023 12:41:00 PM
Many congratulations dear Rose with POTD for your stunning, beautiful poem. So many wonderful, exquisite lines. ‘ I will be your wintry moon’ - love that line. A gorgeous write and so enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you xx
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Date: 12/4/2023 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely love poem being selected POTD, Vie. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
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Date: 12/4/2023 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, love the way you brought this together to tell a beautiful story: )
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Date: 12/4/2023 9:09:00 AM
Beautiful free verse poetry Vie, congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 12/4/2023 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on receiving POTD, well deserved
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Date: 12/4/2023 6:51:00 AM
Oh my dear Vie! This is so softly romantic. I feel the love and dance with your music. It reminds me of the song, "Fly Me to the Moon". Congratulations on the honor of POTD! Alice :)
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Date: 12/4/2023 6:37:00 AM
So beautiful, playful and romantic dear Rose ! You painted so many enticing wintery images . I felt like I danced and twirled along with you ! I especially liked ~ I will be your wintery moon, and you can be my savant star ! Blessings and hugs and congratulations on POTD . Susan :)
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Date: 12/4/2023 6:34:00 AM
Just returning to congratulate you on POTD.. Fully deserved.
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Date: 12/4/2023 6:22:00 AM
Something sweet and joyful today. Much better. Congrats on Potd with this lovely write Rose
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Date: 12/4/2023 5:54:00 AM
Beautifully written. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD.
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Date: 12/4/2023 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a beautiful/romantic write with a lovely ending. Love It... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.....................
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Date: 12/4/2023 5:11:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Vienna. Enjoy your special day today.
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Date: 12/4/2023 4:25:00 AM
Lovely write. Congratulations on POTD. God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 12/4/2023 4:24:00 AM
Very lovely! Congratulations on POTD Rose. Great to see you honored today:)
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Date: 12/4/2023 3:54:00 AM
Lovely poem Rose….Congratulations on POTD!! Debx
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Date: 12/4/2023 3:28:00 AM
Vie, a beautiful romantic poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 12/4/2023 2:54:00 AM
Great poetic expression, congratulations on poem of the day
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Date: 12/4/2023 2:44:00 AM
- Romantic and lovely poem, Vie Rose :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Have a lovely new winter week :) - hugs
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Date: 12/4/2023 2:13:00 AM
Love this romantic potd! Congratulations.
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