A Winter Sonata Of Love


Dance me to the moon on a wintry day of snow and glistening light Hold me in your arms and make me swoon like love does on a winter tide Beneath a parapet of stars where baby deer do scamper without fright, sway me like a leaf on a branch when pirouetting winds arrive; Lacey touch soft as velvet on my shoulders fair, draw me closer to your breast keep me warm inside the winds of this candy cane December. Set my heart aglow dance me to the end of me, then twirl me round and round like a fancy carrousel I will be your wintry moon, and you can be my savant star.
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A beautiful/romantic write/lovely ending. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
Rose  Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Thank you for letting me know I'm thrilled about it Paula, xo
Roger  Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 3:13 AM
Dear, this is so beautiful... Congratulations...
Anaya Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 10:52 AM
Beautiful poetry.." Lacey touch soft as velvet on my shoulders fair, draw me closer to your breast keep me warm inside the winds of this candy cane December" I'm immersed in your words. Congratulations on the poem of the day, Mystic Rose! hugs~Anaya
Cunningham Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Oozing with romance Vie, congrats on the honour of POTD. Tom
Nicole Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 6:48 PM
May you continue to "twirl round and round, like a fancy carousel" my dear friend. This time of year holds beauty, along with many magical moments. The images you paint leave me in complete awe. So festive and romantic. Congratulations Vienna, of Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kaufman Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Many congratulations dear Rose for this lovely POTD. The imagery you carved with your words is truly magnificent. God Bless, Nancy
Bowring Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 12:41 PM
Many congratulations dear Rose with POTD for your stunning, beautiful poem. So many wonderful, exquisite lines. ‘ I will be your wintry moon’ - love that line. A gorgeous write and so enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you xx
Baker Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your lovely love poem being selected POTD, Vie. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
McBride  Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on POTD, love the way you brought this together to tell a beautiful story: )
Edmonds  Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Beautiful free verse poetry Vie, congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle
Empress Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Congratulations on receiving POTD, well deserved
Fowler Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Oh my dear Vie! This is so softly romantic. I feel the love and dance with your music. It reminds me of the song, "Fly Me to the Moon". Congratulations on the honor of POTD! Alice :)
Lawrence Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 6:37 AM
So beautiful, playful and romantic dear Rose ! You painted so many enticing wintery images . I felt like I danced and twirled along with you ! I especially liked ~ I will be your wintery moon, and you can be my savant star ! Blessings and hugs and congratulations on POTD . Susan :)
One Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Just returning to congratulate you on POTD.. Fully deserved.
Brotherton Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 5:54 AM
Beautifully written. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a beautiful/romantic write with a lovely ending. Love It... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.....................
Pandit Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 5:11 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Vienna. Enjoy your special day today.
Mcintosh Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 4:25 AM
Lovely write. Congratulations on POTD. God bless you, love, Gina
Turner Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Very lovely! Congratulations on POTD Rose. Great to see you honored today:)
M  Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 3:54 AM
Lovely poem Rose….Congratulations on POTD!! Debx
Kitchin Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 3:28 AM
Vie, a beautiful romantic poem, congratulations on POTD!
Culverhouse Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 2:54 AM
Great poetic expression, congratulations on poem of the day
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 2:44 AM
- Romantic and lovely poem, Vie Rose :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Have a lovely new winter week :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 2:13 AM
Love this romantic potd! Congratulations.
Seeker Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 1:26 AM
“dance me to the end of me” Oh wow, what a romantic melody! Warmest congratulations on POTD, Mystic Rose
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