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A Winter Morning

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It is snowing outside my window, the sky and ground are one white fog, trees stand bare and brown forlorn, not even a bird sits in song today, weary I go to the kitchen, and fill the kettle with water. The water bubbles over as I stand, pondering something, vague and dull, I pour out the excess, oh the waste, and place it on the stove, soon it is boiling wildly and I make my first cafe. Later, I dress and put on my winter coat, guaranteed for minus fifty degrees, boots, scarf and mittens follow, and I go for my daily walk, in the park the pond is frozen the ducks and swans have gone. I am wondering about if I could skate, on the smooth surface or not, oh, I better forget that crazy idea, the benches are snow covered, no welcoming here in the park so I walk the path quickly. Soon, I come to the edge of a lake the water is full of broken ice, no boats or water skiing I will see, the current is fast and furious, I wonder about the fish below a wind makes me shiver. I retrace my steps turning from the lake, into the park and past the pond, oh look over there a gathering of sparrows, amazed how these little creatures, survive in the bitter cold, at home I put the kettle on. _________________________ February 10, 2018 Poetry/Verse/A Winter Morning Copyright Protected, ID 992-371-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Kettle, Pond, Lake sponsor, Nayda, Ivette Negron Second Place

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Date: 6/2/2018 8:19:00 PM
A lovely take on the challenge. Loved to follow you through your morning. Congrats on your well deserved win, BW.
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Date: 5/19/2018 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. You took me on a wonderful walk.
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Date: 5/18/2018 1:59:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your win. Wonderful narrative.
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Date: 2/18/2018 2:00:00 PM
love this - I felt like I were walking with you, my friend x
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Date: 2/11/2018 1:39:00 PM
Time for another Cafe...All the best BW
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Date: 2/11/2018 11:54:00 AM
You epitomize the loneliness of winter in your beautiful poem with the exception of the pretty sparrows. good Luck!
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Date: 2/11/2018 10:50:00 AM
A wonderful narrative so exquisitely written. Your words were of the cold but your thoughts were deeper than that.
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Date: 2/10/2018 5:58:00 PM
You are so brave and such a good teller of your tale. I don't do cold - and anyway not your cold. But I sense you were rewarded with the beauty of your walk and the cafe.
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