A Windfall of Birds

Give me a void 
filled with the absence 
of human voices.
Let there be a windfall of birds
and the chime of water 
for sound.
Insert the idle sway 
of branches for movement, 
tart apples for taste.
Let my eyes drink colors,
sate me with their flavors.
I will sleep in a womb of silence,
warm as sunlight, 
and dream
I am a wanderer 
of concrete gardens
where the rasp 
of brakes and shriek of horns
tell me the seasons; 
where people rant like crows 
in the long hours of daylight.
I will sigh 
like a gentle Santa Ana wind
and know come morning 
the nightmare will be over.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/16/2018 11:22:00 PM
Dale, this is awesome. Congrats on your much deserved win.
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Date: 2/11/2018 3:23:00 PM
Hello Dale, a really good piece of your life experience, everyday live is full of poetry and symmetry; If we can find time to view it the right light''
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Date: 2/11/2018 10:41:00 AM
Thoughtful and so well-written, Dale. I missed it before.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 2/11/2018 11:21:00 AM
Thanks so much, SW!
Date: 1/26/2018 5:45:00 PM
Congrats Dale on your placement, well deserved;-)
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Date: 1/22/2018 9:36:00 PM
Your poetic lines are stunning Dale. Your use of imagery is truly amazing and makes me savor each and every line of your fantastic write. This poem enticed my heart and mind as well as my senses. Congratulations on your awesome win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/22/2018 7:07:00 PM
The real world...'concrete gardens'...the real nightmare, Dale. Beautifully written expressing a deep longing for the gift of nature's lovely quiet 'in a womb of silence'. I enjoyed your poem and congratulations on your win! :) Sandra
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/22/2018 7:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra!
Date: 1/22/2018 6:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win, I enjoyed this piece.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/22/2018 7:23:00 PM
Thank you, Richard.
Date: 1/22/2018 5:39:00 PM
Really love this, Dale. I see it won with Skat. BIG congrats
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Date: 1/22/2018 2:23:00 PM
I love this, Dale. Your first line drew me in, and I thoroughly enjoyed your imagery. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/22/2018 10:36:00 AM
Dale G :) Congrats on your win, thank you for entering my contest. HUGS **SKAT**
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/22/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thanks so much, Skat!
Date: 1/17/2018 9:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dale. Another great write for you!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/18/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 1/13/2018 10:56:00 AM
I was about to GPS your void, but all turned cold with steel, glass and concrete - cities are my soul's nemesis and exactly why I sipped the beginning of your poem soo very slowly. It read as the opposite of my nemesis looks and feels, like Eden. Very good write ... CayCay
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/13/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thanks, CayCay!
Date: 1/13/2018 9:17:00 AM
Beautiful write, Dale! Congratulations on this win! ...Fran
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/13/2018 9:53:00 AM
Thanks, Fran!
Date: 5/28/2017 5:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dale. Pure natural sounds are rare and precious these days. // Barry
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/28/2017 11:39:00 AM
Thanks, Barry. You, too.
Date: 5/27/2017 11:09:00 PM
Lovely images, Dale! Congrats!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/28/2017 11:38:00 AM
Congrats to you, too.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/28/2017 11:37:00 AM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 5/27/2017 10:18:00 PM
"Give me a void filled with the absence of human voices" ~ as soon as I read that first line, I was drawn in like a magnet. This is the type of poetry I truly enjoy! thank you and congrats :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/28/2017 11:37:00 AM
Thanks, Laura. And thanks for acknowledging me poem.
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