A Wind Storm On My Beach

Life is a beach but not too sunny  when cancer comes along.
The day it came to me, I never could imagine the obnoxious waves 
that would come rolling onto the beach I so enjoyed.

With tests, surgery, eventual radiation treatments,
and with each new rolling wave of depressing information,
 it plunged me deeper and deeper into despair.
Being told the lump inside my breast 
was probably benign - then learning it was not.
Being told I should not need chemo - then being told
 indeed, you do need chemo- you are  “genetically at risk.”
Each wave was one of helplessness, uncertainty, and dread.
Turning down chemo and opting “only” for  my 34 days of radiation
was not what my surgeon desired, but I am considered  now a survivor,
albeit one who whose next possible encounter with a wind storm
would be that of an encounter with a tsunami.

I plant on my beach now beautiful trees with fruits' nourishment
to combat rare effects of unnecessary treatments in my storm's aftermath.
However, I thank God for the sage advice of the few professionals
who counseled me intelligently in the time of my wind storm and also 
in its aftermath, and I thank God for every sunny day on my beach.

May 28, 2019 For The "Topic of Cancer" Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish
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Faulkner Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 1:14 PM
My husband just went through cancer treatment, I can relate to your pain, am hoping for a healthy outcome for you and many sunny days on your beach, Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 9:30 AM
sorry about your husband. I take it he is ok now. It's just one more thing to dread in one's future after having had it. I guess your hubbie, I and others have to think as positive as we can!
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 5:22 PM
fabulous metaphorical poem Andrea, keep on fighting my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 1:08 AM
My prayers beautiful Andrea, and best wishes, Aloha wk
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 12:09 AM
I love the brilliant metaphors in this poem Andrea. I am so happy to know you are a survivor. You have the fighting spirit and that is what it takes. Beautiful! xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 7:06 PM
thanks, dear friend. I wish this had been a rhyming contest. It is hard for me to do free verse on a topic like this.
Anish Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 9:21 PM
Dear Andrea I think that perhaps I should write about my health problems, too. Writing certainly helps with health. I am undergoing treatment now for Krone's disease among other things. I think that I will continue to write verse. I read to a crowd at the Sailor, Soldier,Marines, Airman's home last Saturday. I got a good response! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 7:04 PM
sorry about krone's disease, Matt. I only wrote of my cancer becuse of the contest. It's hard to really know what to say on this topic when I did all my best emotional writing in the past. Congrats on the reading you did.
Godwin Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 4:42 PM
This could be the form, 'biographical' and that you laid it out is good to see. The contents I hate, absolutely do, and the reference to a tsunami should it return, breaks my heart so I give thanks to all harvested as prevention upon your beautiful and UNmarred (now or ever) beach. Love ... CayCay
Bauer Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 4:31 PM
a powerful telling of your experience, andrea! may you never encounter another wind storm...
Pandit Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 9:34 AM
Quite a storm that was..glad that it has passed..a sincere write, Andrea..I felt its pain and recovery. All the best.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 8:50 AM
A heartfelt write! Prayers for you, dear one!
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