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A Wind Storm At Sea

A Wind Storm At Sea I sail the ocean blue with my sails up and full of air Short bursts of wind power my voyage across the earth’s oceans To the welcoming shores Courageous men are my crew, for a ship is like an island and their home ~ A storm appears from nowhere Causing high waves to beat down on the ship Winds wrench with howls and screams The men stagger like drunken sailors There is nothing more frightening than a storm at sea The crew fights desperately to keep the ship under control But the waves grow higher with every breath the wind blows ~ The storm eventually becomes still and the waves of the sea hush Early morning sun illuminates the water around the ship Everyone is tired after the storm's wrath The ship has survived once again and we set a course and make a path Back to safe harbor of the welcoming shores © 8/28/2015
Contest Name: WIND Sponsor: SKAT A
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Fraser Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 12:36 AM
Being on the sea most of my life this caught my eye right away Eve, you have captured the essence of it all. Blessings Carl
Hamilton Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 2:38 PM
this is exceptional Eve congrats on win hugs 7
Roper Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Thank you,Shadow, coming from you means a whole bunch Hugs Eve
A. Sharma Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 1:10 AM
Congrats on your yet another superb winning write Eve!
Roper Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 7:39 AM
Thank you , Dr. Upma A. Sharma, for constant support I truly appreciated Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 6:30 PM
I like how it ends with all safe and well!! HOpe this one scored high. I see you won. So BIG congrats.
Roper Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 6:33 PM
Thank you hugs Eve
A  Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my WIND contest. SKAT LOVE
Roper Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 10:09 AM
Thank you, Skat, for your encouragement and placing me in your contest Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 2:24 PM
Eve, this is an excellent write for the contest, if it does not place high there is something terribly wrong and thanks for visiting my park bench poem ~~
Roper Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 3:42 PM
Thank you so much for the confidence for me Hugs Eve
Boddie Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 12:32 PM
sailing sounds like a dangerous journey....an adventure that does concern me....that's why I don't get on boats to sail the ocean blue....I don't know for sure but sharks probably like dark meat too....lol
Roper Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 12:44 PM
I have a feeling sharks don't discriminate, like you I don’t go out in the water I don’t swim they would have to tie me to the mask
Sathasivam Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Excellent. Your graphic fits your poem perfectly. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Roper Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 10:09 AM
Thank you, Ravi, I appreciate the support and encouragement Hugs Eve
Anish Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 8:26 PM
Fine poem of the high sea! Like to see more of your work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Roper Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Thank you, Matthew, I appreciate your support Hugs Eve
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