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A Warning To Clinging Vines

Move over and give me some space Too tight is your strangling embrace I am suffocating I’d hate to have to buy some mace Spray it in your possessive face Loving turns to hating *Entry for Dr. Ram's Tail-Rhyme contest

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Don Johnson

Date: 8/8/2011 11:47:00 PM

oh deer how queer, wimmen problems slide, the gander wants the goose, better seeming be tongetied, then let the wrong words loose, ive tried ...n fried ...now footloose.. whats the use :( poor ol Johnson 9-aug-11

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/8/2011 4:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Diane Locksley

Date: 8/7/2011 5:41:00 PM

Go get him! I love this poem. I'd have ranked it higher in the contest, but each to his own. Best to you, Diane

Jack Horne

Date: 8/7/2011 11:16:00 AM

Quick congrats before I get logged out again!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/7/2011 6:55:00 AM

congrats on your splendid wins including your angel piece, carols... wonderful! ;) huggs

Kash Poet

Date: 8/6/2011 10:19:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your win.Visit me if we can.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2011 9:35:00 PM

I think I remember this one. It was a good one for those dang clinging vines to read. Congrats, Carolyn.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 8/5/2011 9:18:00 PM

WOW Carolyn, I missed reading this one, til now. This is a gem! Gritty, witty and cuts quite nicely. Congrats!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/5/2011 9:17:00 PM

I would rate this very high. Carolyn. Love, Joyce

James Fraser

Date: 8/4/2011 7:06:00 PM

Clinging vines sure do choke eventually Carolyn. Good luck in Dr. Rams contest, he'll like this for sure :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/3/2011 9:20:00 PM

Great entry here Carolyn. I am way behind in my comments. Too much going on. I am just headed for a church study group and stopped to see who was emailing me and there you are. Thank you. Love, Joyce

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/2/2011 7:05:00 PM

'Spray it in your possessive face'---you evil girl you! just messin with ya'. I dig this one C.D.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/2/2011 9:37:00 AM

Such a powerful piece, Carolyn - clever title too

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2011 1:06:00 AM

good one, I can't stand this kind of stalker personality!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/1/2011 8:23:00 PM

You say it so well Carolyn, Love your expressive emotion - best of luck in the contest.

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/1/2011 6:34:00 PM

it's too hot for luby duby

Joseph Osita

Date: 8/1/2011 12:23:00 PM

An awesome write! Best wishes in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/1/2011 11:09:00 AM

Thanks for the entry , Carolyn

James Peranteau

Date: 7/31/2011 10:50:00 PM

Wow Carolyn, I'd hate to be the soul on the other end of that warning ! *smiles* Is this a new form Carolyn? It sure packs a punch ! Mace, wow ! lol...Have a safe night dear friend....much love, james

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/31/2011 9:00:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, carolyn

Cory Long

Date: 7/31/2011 7:12:00 PM

this is great with powerful emotions.. good luck in the contest. cory

Kash Poet

Date: 7/31/2011 6:36:00 PM

An interesing take on the contest Carolyn....like it.Best wishes in Dr.Mehta's contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/31/2011 6:34:00 PM

Good one that some women and I suppose some me face in their lifetime..Thanks for stopping by..Premie pants placed on Princess and tie her soft collar around the pants to hold them up..She can't get to her tail now..Thank goodness that we came up with something that is helping and she is loving it because it helps her stay warm.Sara

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/31/2011 6:21:00 PM

so angry. "Spray it in your possessive face..." I love it!

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/31/2011 6:02:00 PM

good one Carolyn, I have not tried this form before , will have to see if I can come up with something, best of luck in the contest