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A Visitor

A woman left for work. Her child went to school. A latchkey kid, her daughter that day got straight home from school, aware of every rule to not let strangers in no matter what. A neighbor said a visitor she’d seen go to their apartment. He wore a smile and the common workman’s outfit that was green. All seemed okay; he went in for a while. No one saw the maintenance man leaving. It’s been surmised he left by the back door. The woman with a missing child is grieving. Her lovely daughter has been seen no more. Adults themselves by strangers have been tricked. So too was she whom the visitor picked. April 7, 2023 for Julia Ward's A Visitor Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/9/2023 5:10:00 PM
i can't imagine, such a visitor in my house, this is scary, dangerous i guess, take care
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Date: 4/8/2023 9:55:00 PM
These days such happenings are not rare. We have to be on guard of the strange visitors ! Well crafted Andrea...
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Date: 4/8/2023 3:19:00 PM
A fair warning! I always worried about my latchkey kids. They were boys, but thought they could handle anything. Life was different then. Now: don't open your door!
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Date: 4/8/2023 10:04:00 AM
I didn't think it was going to end well, I was hoping for a twist to your story, perhaps a green garden fairy? B0l Andrea
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Date: 4/8/2023 8:35:00 AM
Oh my goodness, and he got away with it, but karma will find him, and hell will welcome him. Excellent poetry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/8/2023 6:50:00 AM
Brutal but so real
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Date: 4/8/2023 1:25:00 AM
A cruel visitor, well done, Andrea:)
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