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A twisted tale -Jane's Jewel-

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A twisted tale -Jane's Jewel-

Mardi Gras "The Medieval Story"  

On a hot, heavy night in Orleans,
Joan and Jane were seen rubbing chest on chest
An inviting, intimate moment, to undress
Two pretty trimmed tops, eating like dames
They touched in ways, that drove those who make war insane
The secret spilled before the sun sprawled across the floor

Medieval England, banging on iron set doors,
All around men and women, wanting to witness the whiplash 
Beads and beads of love, thrown at their feet
Joan' and Jane', having fun in front of, yesterdays courtyard
Sweet acts of flagellation were performed to stimulate the crowd
Screaming, and receiving, intense, brutal lacerations 
In the eyes of endless nudity, everything wet in between 
Left to right, a secluded society, dance in masquerade 
Two men rise and ravage Jane, from hip to hip
Join-in, was a Jouster, and Lord Johnsburg, 
They came in a little closer to claim, Joan
Closing, and inflicting as much damage as possible

Crestfallen forces of the unknown, -the audience grows
Remain firm and indulge this wet period of the Middle Ages,

The first crusade held stones in each hand, 
Applauding to neck the beauty of friends
A noose hanging high held no head on this day
Yelling to feel the pain perils of anguish, 
This was in reality the vassal of Jane
The King, ask to see them on their knees
Before he seeded, sending the Spanish tickler, 
Fetching for the finest skin
At her end, Joan, watched Jane, spread like never before
Perfumed skin, rising up in smoke, -Joan's final stroke
Left burning at the Stake, In a Medieval World, from hell
The Siege of Joan and Jane did not end well
 
A lonely Bard, now sits and sings a sadistic tale,
A tale, of dirty deeds, -a dancing bloody masquerade 
Joan and Jane, compensating for the Mardi Gras Parade

By: SKAT

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 9/3/2016 8:38:00 PM
Didn't understand it, but enjoyed it.
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Date: 7/25/2016 6:14:00 PM
Hola, Skat!!!
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Date: 4/14/2016 7:57:00 PM
Hi, Skat, was just reading the limerick winners and saw your name there so wanted to just stop and say HI
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Date: 1/10/2016 10:07:00 AM
Has someone switched the thermostat up? seems to have gotten a little hotter. I think it shall be time for a cold shower soon. I could go on and on Skat when it would be enough to say this is an excellent write all round. One would always know this was a Skat write for you do have a style that is yours. A seven and a fave. Your friend Vladuslav.
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Date: 12/29/2015 9:26:00 AM
See? Assemble a chapbook. Or several. So others can enjoy your work. A Twisted Tale is one of your best I've read. Oh, dark, for sure. But powerfully intense. Joan and Jane, compensating for the Mardi Gras Parade. What an end to a fantastic piece. xo
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Date: 6/26/2015 10:43:00 PM
quite a tale
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Date: 6/19/2015 3:25:00 PM
Your poetry dominates like a two hour movie. It's visually entertaining and how you directed the scene was creatively out together. It speaks of honesty with a whole lot of passion. It was a great journey, thank you for a great ride. You are be courageous poet.
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Date: 5/30/2015 10:56:00 AM
The imagery is well suited for the ambiance that the author has created throughout this dark piece, of sexual arousal, promiscuity and debauchery. As always ...Good work. Emile. #7
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Date: 5/18/2015 11:12:00 AM
Wow.... this is really goog
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Date: 3/15/2015 1:51:00 PM
Aroused a bit, I must declare...interesting and inviting. Roger
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Date: 3/6/2015 5:05:00 AM
A great and masterfully dark and original piece you have penned SCAT!
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Date: 3/3/2015 3:33:00 PM
I liked the edges of the visuals you have in this one.
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Date: 2/23/2015 12:48:00 AM
Wow, dark and compelling just like an epic elocution..superb Skat!! A 7 defo for me.
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Date: 2/21/2015 10:40:00 PM
Got me hooked till the end as if I was actually witnessing this dark tale, SKAT! You got a style all your own, girl. A 7! HUgs and smiles. :D Kim
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:03:00 PM
Skat, so dark and brutal is the theme but the written is magnificent, you have an incredible talent with the pen and thanks for your visits and comments to my poetry ~~
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Date: 1/13/2015 10:21:00 PM
I think you have captured the sad truth of such relationships throughout history, in this somewhat sad, yet highly creative piece.
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Date: 12/25/2014 12:39:00 PM
An excellent poem! Lots of colourful originality. This is the third poem today I have read concerning the theme of BDSM. A while back I wrote a poem concerning this "taboo" subject. I now feel a little more confident about publishing it. Many thanks!! :-) john. P.s Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/1/2014 10:51:00 PM
Wow SKAT you have a way with words... Love it. cheers Kev
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Date: 11/17/2014 2:09:00 AM
oh my! decadent and naughty!
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Date: 10/20/2014 9:50:00 PM
Hi, my dearest friend & poet sis, Skat! I'm glad and so honored to stop by here to read this exceptional piece of yours. You always write so well! Though the story is poignant I enjoyed the read very much. Thank you so much for sharing and belated thanks once again for your greetings last time on my b-day. Sending you and your loved ones, many warm hugs! lovem4everLeonora
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Date: 10/20/2014 9:41:00 AM
Nice clarification. Beautiful expression...Great conclusion...Thanks dear. Best wishes from my consciousness...
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Date: 10/19/2014 6:23:00 PM
Hi SKAT, I am new here, I liked your zombie poem best. I like the fifth line of the first stanza in this Mardi Gras poem, killer line!
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Date: 10/17/2014 12:57:00 PM
wow is all i can say... are a real writer
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Date: 10/16/2014 6:09:00 PM
what a brutal description but it held my attention. not to mention the sticky situation. good stuff.
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Date: 10/12/2014 6:54:00 PM
I hate when this happens, LOL Great Poem though !
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