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For The Five Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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"I find tranquility where sand meets sea at twilight's gleam and poets dream" - by author Reclined am I beneath the shimmer of a summer sky. It spills pink-persimmon woven in and out of feathered clouds. I relish these moments when the strawberry moon’s ascent is nigh. Sand, sea, and serenity reign here far from city crowds. To the sun that lingered all day on my skin I toss a kiss goodbye.

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Jay Narain

Date: 3/16/2025 10:38:00 AM

Beautiful short poem. Loved this.

Ann Peck

Date: 3/16/2025 10:27:00 AM

I love this, Andrea. Such lovely colors and so peaceful. Majestic. Congratulations!

Marikate Kingston

Date: 3/15/2025 10:02:00 PM

I wish I could climb into your poem. I would feel such zen. It is truly lovely. I used to live 10 minutes from the beach and I loved going there in the early morning before the crowds and children arrived. Your picture reminds me of those times I loved. A poem so worth a win.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/16/2025 4:33:00 PM

Glad how much you liked it!

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/15/2025 1:15:00 PM

Those are five wonderful lines, Andrea. The picture, quote, and poem are exquisite. Congratulations on your win.

Lin Lane

Date: 3/15/2025 11:30:00 AM

Well done, Andrea!

Tom Woody

Date: 3/15/2025 9:36:00 AM

Can I predict a winner or what? Lol

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/15/2025 9:36:00 AM

Lovely five lines and quote Andrea, the picture too, what a beautiful sunset. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Beryl

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 3/15/2025 5:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Jcb Brul

Date: 3/15/2025 4:16:00 AM

Mesmerizing 5-liner gem! Congratulations. ^__^

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/15/2025 4:08:00 AM

Big Congrats to win TOP. Love and Blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2025 2:37:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Andrea :) - hugs

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/15/2025 2:15:00 AM

Beautiful dear poet. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/14/2025 5:52:00 PM

Andrea, this is a sweet scene and speaks fondly of a mostly secluded place. It's definitely something that leads us to feel good!! Smiles!!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/14/2025 10:28:00 AM

Great imagery with perfect alliteration I'm sure it's a win.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/14/2025 10:06:00 AM

Wow!What a beautiful picture of beach. Really loved your poem and the beach.Best wishes.

Sand Blown

Date: 3/14/2025 8:13:00 AM

it reminds of so much..... north pacific australia, the sands of the desert ......and the unbelievable spill of tides as sea shells.......len

Paige Hind

Date: 3/13/2025 10:55:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Andrea! I am okay, I am having family problems, so I did not have time to write lately - I really missed it and being here on PS. Thank you for kindly worrying about me! <3 I like your flow in this Quintain. I love beach poems. :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/13/2025 9:54:00 PM

Yes, indeed; the shore is a lovely place to spend a summer's day. Very magically, sea and sky, where they meet, like a Siren's compelling call. Beckoning for enchanting.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/13/2025 8:58:00 PM

I would like a 'visual' on this poem, especially the last line. In fact, I want to travel there with you and also toss a kiss. Such a poetic poem, Sweetie, I'm sure it's The Beautiful she is looking for. CayCay