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It's Thanksgiving, so stop hugging your poodle And come here to Maui for Aunt Ida's guava strudel Flower wreaths she has made So of course, you'll get leid Then go home to write your tropical footle 11/17/22

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Date: 2/7/2023 2:48:00 AM
Hey Rob: This is such a fun footle. I lived on Maui for 4 years in Lahaina. I can just smell the tuberose from here. Love how you rhymed poodle with strudel. SuZ
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Date: 11/22/2022 12:19:00 PM
I still have yet to create footles, a Hawaiian one would be just fine, ~Anaya Papaya! LOL
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/23/2022 4:59:00 PM
oodles of noodles, footles, see not that hard! Lol
Date: 11/22/2022 5:09:00 AM
I enjoyed this hawaiian limerick, Nicely done
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/23/2022 4:57:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, glad you enjoyed.

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