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NB This is a repost original was deleted. Unfortunately I was without an internet for two days and I am truly blocked. I am sorry but I shall probably miss some poem. I can't help it. How pleasant it was to drive out of Louisville, Accompanied by my dearest lovely sweet Jill. Quickly we found a vantage place upon a hill. A stunning scene before us was a joyful thrill. A hillside green with ferns growing near a rill. Dotted here and there birds flew with a shrill, Sometimes finding some rest on a far-off mill. I saw that some people had planned a landfill, Big beeches, hornbeams, bushes of cranesbill. But red dusk fell, Jill and I felt the subtle chill, To a cafeteria we went for we had time to kill.

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Date: 1/22/2022 8:21:00 AM
Creative one. Reads like a lovely day. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/14/2022 4:28:00 AM
Hello Vctor, like yourself I have been absent from Poetry Soup, when that happens I find it's impossible to catch up. Enjoyable Monorhyme...Delice
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Date: 1/12/2022 10:51:00 AM
Awesome monorhyme, Victor. Thank you for reposting. No worries my friend. If it's not the internet, it's time. If it's not time, it's the internet (lol) Blessings
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Date: 1/12/2022 9:17:00 AM
great monorhyme, Victor. Blessing to you thorough out your new year my friend.
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Date: 1/12/2022 7:58:00 AM
Hell, Victor! So glad you posted this again. I sure do like it! So much in it to sense. And close to me here in .Lexington, so easier to imagine! I haven’t been here that much over the past month, have missed you! Blessings!
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Date: 1/12/2022 5:19:00 AM
Wonderful write... all my best to Jill. God bless you Victor. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/11/2022 8:14:00 PM
This is beautiful, Victor, the rhymes are spot on:) I was wondering what happened to you... Now I know:)
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Date: 1/11/2022 4:30:00 PM
awesome monorhyming. And don't feel bad. I can't ever seem to catch up here. I come back a few days later and comments have scrolled off, so I suppose I am missing out on commenting back to my kind supporters. I think today I will be able to get back to square one.
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Date: 1/11/2022 3:53:00 PM
This piece is full of lovely personality and nature's beauty; a fun trip Victor! That internet downtime happens to us all, you'll catch up.
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Date: 1/11/2022 3:48:00 PM
Great rhyme Victor. I know what it feels like to be without the internet. I hope you get connected soon. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/11/2022 3:32:00 PM
Well done Victor. Beautiful imagery and good rhyme. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/11/2022 3:31:00 PM
Most wonderful memories of Jill. Shalom shalom and Happy New Year, Victor.
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Date: 1/11/2022 2:50:00 PM
Hello! Victor The story was enjoyable to read. I liked the rhyme and thought it was well-written. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 1/11/2022 12:49:00 PM
I love this beauty of a poem, that describes so much going on. The rhyming is also very pleasing.
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Date: 1/11/2022 10:03:00 AM
It sounds like a serene place that I would love to visit one day :)
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Date: 1/11/2022 7:52:00 AM
Sounds like a grand day out Victor, im sure Mohammed Ali came from there. Welcome back. Tom
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Date: 1/11/2022 7:22:00 AM
Hi Victor….very cleverly done and love the picture also. Enjoyed and glad you are back! Debx
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Date: 1/11/2022 7:11:00 AM
- A lovely rhyme poem, Victor - (good that everything is well and you are back online :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/11/2022 6:50:00 AM
Very nice, Victor! Especially love lines 9&10! ~ hugs
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Date: 1/11/2022 6:42:00 AM
Victor, it's lovely to see you again. As always, you've done a fantastic job with this tough to perform monorhyme, and this is the first time I've seen you use this particular form.SP mail
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Date: 1/11/2022 6:10:00 AM
Glad you are back, Victor. Superbly done, as always, in this difficult to execute monorhyme.
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Date: 1/11/2022 4:02:00 AM
Lovely penning dear Victor ! This mono rhyme, I too must try ! Without internet, I am sure you got enough time to write poems, thus turning your disability into an advantage !
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Date: 1/11/2022 5:28:00 AM
No, I was simply lost. Mental block.
Date: 1/11/2022 3:53:00 AM
Wow! Superbly done, Victor
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