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A Trip To Louisville

NB  This is a repost original was deleted.  Unfortunately I was without an internet for two days and I am truly blocked.  I am sorry but I shall probably miss some poem.  I can't help it.

How pleasant it was to drive out of Louisville,
Accompanied by my dearest lovely sweet Jill.
Quickly we found a vantage place upon a hill.
A stunning scene before us was a joyful thrill.
A hillside green with ferns growing near a rill. 
Dotted here and there birds flew with a shrill,
Sometimes finding some rest on a far-off mill. 
I saw that some people had planned a landfill,
Big beeches, hornbeams, bushes of cranesbill. 
But red dusk fell, Jill and I felt the subtle chill,
To a cafeteria we went for we had time to kill.
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Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 8:21 AM
Creative one. Reads like a lovely day. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
Skelly Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 4:28 AM
Hello Vctor, like yourself I have been absent from Poetry Soup, when that happens I find it's impossible to catch up. Enjoyable Monorhyme...Delice
Messina Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 10:51 AM
Awesome monorhyme, Victor. Thank you for reposting. No worries my friend. If it's not the internet, it's time. If it's not time, it's the internet (lol) Blessings
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 9:17 AM
great monorhyme, Victor. Blessing to you thorough out your new year my friend.
Eslinger Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Hell, Victor! So glad you posted this again. I sure do like it! So much in it to sense. And close to me here in .Lexington, so easier to imagine! I haven’t been here that much over the past month, have missed you! Blessings!
Mcintosh Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 5:19 AM
Wonderful write... all my best to Jill. God bless you Victor. Love, Gina
Daniel Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 8:14 PM
This is beautiful, Victor, the rhymes are spot on:) I was wondering what happened to you... Now I know:)
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 4:30 PM
awesome monorhyming. And don't feel bad. I can't ever seem to catch up here. I come back a few days later and comments have scrolled off, so I suppose I am missing out on commenting back to my kind supporters. I think today I will be able to get back to square one.
Kiser Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:53 PM
This piece is full of lovely personality and nature's beauty; a fun trip Victor! That internet downtime happens to us all, you'll catch up.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:48 PM
Great rhyme Victor. I know what it feels like to be without the internet. I hope you get connected soon. Blessings xxoo
Ball Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:32 PM
Well done Victor. Beautiful imagery and good rhyme. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Deo Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:31 PM
Most wonderful memories of Jill. Shalom shalom and Happy New Year, Victor.
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 2:50 PM
Hello! Victor The story was enjoyable to read. I liked the rhyme and thought it was well-written. Blessings ~ Debra
Buehler Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 12:49 PM
I love this beauty of a poem, that describes so much going on. The rhyming is also very pleasing.
Rose  Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 10:03 AM
It sounds like a serene place that I would love to visit one day :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Sounds like a grand day out Victor, im sure Mohammed Ali came from there. Welcome back. Tom
M  Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Hi Victor….very cleverly done and love the picture also. Enjoyed and glad you are back! Debx
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 7:11 AM
- A lovely rhyme poem, Victor - (good that everything is well and you are back online :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 6:50 AM
Very nice, Victor! Especially love lines 9&10! ~ hugs
Poet Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 6:42 AM
Victor, it's lovely to see you again. As always, you've done a fantastic job with this tough to perform monorhyme, and this is the first time I've seen you use this particular form.SP mail
Pandit Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 6:10 AM
Glad you are back, Victor. Superbly done, as always, in this difficult to execute monorhyme.
George Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 4:02 AM
Lovely penning dear Victor ! This mono rhyme, I too must try ! Without internet, I am sure you got enough time to write poems, thus turning your disability into an advantage !
Buhagiar Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 5:28 AM
No, I was simply lost. Mental block.
Seeker Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:53 AM
Wow! Superbly done, Victor
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