A Tribute

Only a thought, a simple glimmer
An attempt at honouring a creator
An artist, a soliliquy in his brushstroke
His stolid demeanour many thoughts provoke
His unusual honesty naked at best
His lot be ended yet his memory attests
Without a doubt his mastery he met
An "Indian woman with umbrella" I view
And infallibly my curiosity it drew

From her downcast eyes
To her weathered boots
The umbrella signifies a hint of modernisation
Yet her look is a contradiction in my amateur opinion
It reminds me of me in this country I live in
Where my hue has me abandoned although 
It is where my grandparents did grow
Sombre looking with no trace of arrogance
Unlike so many others time has surpassed

I look in the corner at the artists scrawled initials
And plan to remember this painting incredible 
T.C Cannon is this artist's name
And now I hear just his art remains . . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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La France Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 12:56 PM
Nice writing -- congratulations on your win
Strand Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 11:56 PM
Congrats on your succes in Abe's contest Fathima Rgds Brian.
Winter Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 3:18 PM
Bravo on a well deserved and beautiful win! Had to stop to congratulate you. Hugs, Shar xoxo
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 2:24 PM
What a lovely winning poem! Congratulations...this was wonderful ! Carrie
Hudson Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 2:18 PM
Congrats on your fifth placement in the contest. Brilliant write!-AA
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June 30, 2009 at 12:21 PM
Creative view with an interesting perspective. Congratulations on being chosen as one of the contest winners. Keep on writing! Enjoy your honor. Karen
Moreno Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Fathima, congrats with your success in the contest...Raul
Lopez Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 10:42 AM
congratulations you have won 5th place in the contest."Native American Ekphrasis"(t.c. cannon) Thank you for supporting my contest. ..........Alopez
Winter Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 12:49 PM
Awesome Ekphrasis! Fathima, good luck in the contest and thank you so kindly for your thoughtful congrats. Appreciate it so much. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 9:16 AM
Fathma this poem is excellent - Best wishes in the contest but I doubt you will need them for this poem stands on its own - God Bless, MJ
Jordan Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 9:16 AM
Fathma this poem is excellent - Best wishes in the contest but I doubt you will need them for this poem stands on its own - God Bless, MJ
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