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A Tribute

Only a thought, a simple glimmer An attempt at honouring a creator An artist, a soliliquy in his brushstroke His stolid demeanour many thoughts provoke His unusual honesty naked at best His lot be ended yet his memory attests Without a doubt his mastery he met An "Indian woman with umbrella" I view And infallibly my curiosity it drew From her downcast eyes To her weathered boots The umbrella signifies a hint of modernisation Yet her look is a contradiction in my amateur opinion It reminds me of me in this country I live in Where my hue has me abandoned although It is where my grandparents did grow Sombre looking with no trace of arrogance Unlike so many others time has surpassed I look in the corner at the artists scrawled initials And plan to remember this painting incredible T.C Cannon is this artist's name And now I hear just his art remains . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/1/2009 12:56:00 PM
Nice writing -- congratulations on your win
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Date: 6/30/2009 11:56:00 PM
Congrats on your succes in Abe's contest Fathima Rgds Brian.
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Date: 6/30/2009 3:18:00 PM
Bravo on a well deserved and beautiful win! Had to stop to congratulate you. Hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 6/30/2009 2:24:00 PM
What a lovely winning poem! Congratulations...this was wonderful ! Carrie
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Date: 6/30/2009 2:18:00 PM
Congrats on your fifth placement in the contest. Brilliant write!-AA
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Date: 6/30/2009 12:21:00 PM
Creative view with an interesting perspective. Congratulations on being chosen as one of the contest winners. Keep on writing! Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 6/30/2009 12:11:00 PM
Fathima, congrats with your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 6/30/2009 10:42:00 AM
congratulations you have won 5th place in the contest."Native American Ekphrasis"(t.c. cannon) Thank you for supporting my contest. ..........Alopez
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Date: 6/1/2009 12:49:00 PM
Awesome Ekphrasis! Fathima, good luck in the contest and thank you so kindly for your thoughtful congrats. Appreciate it so much. Love, Shar
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Date: 6/1/2009 9:16:00 AM
Fathma this poem is excellent - Best wishes in the contest but I doubt you will need them for this poem stands on its own - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/1/2009 9:16:00 AM
Fathma this poem is excellent - Best wishes in the contest but I doubt you will need them for this poem stands on its own - God Bless, MJ
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