AWARDED FIRST PLACE : Concrete poem contest sponsored by: Poetry Soup Team
a prism of sadness a piece of soul falls from the windows of the house where you live trickling droplets of emotion too hard to handle finally let go relieving the strain of your pain they fall from your eyes like rain until you are totally drained so you can rise up again to play the game `````
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