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A Talented Philanderer

A talented philanderer is Wind. He often visits Meadow. He exhales. Beneath his breath, her blades of grass are pinned. When done with Meadow, then away he sails. With Forest he has been so many nights! Her trees’ limbs in late autumn he unveils. Moaning, gyrating, Wind’s desire ignites as Mother Nature swiftly he goes through. Oh, many are the skilled Wind’s sweet delights. But oh, what heights that Wind is taken to when he decides to wend his way to Sea where her enticing waters sparkle blue. Her body rolls in ecstasy as he comes gusting, lusting for her from aloft. I think he is her fondest devotee. Wind comes to me at times, but as a waft, for I prefer caresses that are soft. July 18, 2022 for the Five Stanza Terza Rima Poetry Contest Sponsor: L Milton Hankins

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Date: 8/4/2022 1:32:00 PM
Very sensuous writing, I like your amazing use of personification and the wonderful ending... soupmail
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Date: 7/30/2022 11:48:00 PM
Wind's course is beautifully traced ! I like most, the wind over the seas ! "Her body rolls in ecstasy as he comes gusting, lusting for her from aloft. I think he is her fondest devotee." Lovely lines.....
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Date: 7/28/2022 4:45:00 PM
Literally divine! Sorry that I missed this POTD, Panagiota xxx
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Date: 7/25/2022 5:57:00 PM
Truly love this, Andrea, wrote a poem many years ago, similar, only i had the wind as a ghost..
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Date: 7/25/2022 2:16:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one. He (the wind that winds) would definitely be known as a gigolo or promiscuous. Thank you for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 7/21/2022 2:31:00 PM
Well I'll be blowed Andeea, what a blast ' I can Hear if going fast. ' up and up, ever higher Who'da thunk you'd write such a roarer? Taking a flight of such breathless's Musings ti's most wild and turvy To elict the power that drives The flames of ulitmate fires.'
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Date: 7/21/2022 7:42:00 AM
Ooh la la! Love it! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 7/20/2022 10:06:00 AM
wow, fav this one. Such imagery.
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:39:00 AM
oh yes! that wayward wind! lovely write :)
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:35:00 AM
Very nice, Andrea. I especially like the last two lines.
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Date: 7/20/2022 6:51:00 AM
You poetry is excellent, Andrea, this poem is so engaging. The passion expressed through the wind is thrilling. The imagery and intensity are moving. Great entry for the contest, and should be a POTD or POTW IMHO. Smiles ~ Hugs Bill
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Date: 7/20/2022 5:16:00 AM
OK, We have a winner and a POTD. This is sooooooo goooood Andrea, the imagery, metaphor and personification.....amazing. This should blow the judges mind.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/20/2022 8:18:00 PM
no, I don't think it's Potd, John.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/20/2022 8:17:00 PM
I sure hope so.
Date: 7/19/2022 9:04:00 PM
So unique and passionate. I love it Andrea . Full of life ! So creative. Hugs to you my friend , Susan :)
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Date: 7/19/2022 5:58:00 PM
Love it. You are a very creative and talented soul. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/19/2022 5:32:00 PM
Wind's audacious nature. You described him in a teasing and playful manner! How creative, Andrea.
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Date: 7/19/2022 4:43:00 PM
Andrea, your poetry is indeed a joy to explore because of the lovely and unique way that you write it. I have no doubt that Milton would appreciate the creative writing that comes from your brilliant pen. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 7/19/2022 4:07:00 PM
Sometimes the poetry takes us. Uses us and places us in times position of command. Tells the truth of itself being the thing it is. No translation is needed the reader just knows what the majority has read.
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Date: 7/19/2022 4:03:00 PM
Very original to think of the wind that way. Creative write from your talented pen, Andrea.
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Date: 7/19/2022 3:21:00 PM
Exquisite, blown away! You're writing always a treat. Robert
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