A Sweet Love

Do You Hear Love? On that day you took my breath away I said I do and sweet love was at bay You being in my life was the only way I Listened to Love I pledged my love,in my heart you’ll stay We got married in the beginning of May I still love you and it will never stray And I Let Love Fill My Heart The sun is shining although it's not day Our union causes us to enjoy life and play Because love spoke and had it's say 3-10-17 Alexis Y

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2017 6:27:00 PM

was this for the precious contest, Alexis? It's so lovely!!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2017 3:50:00 PM

It is lovely when true love can keep us company all through our life, Alexis. Your lovely poem is sweetly romantic. Regards // paul

Chris Green

Date: 3/10/2017 1:34:00 PM

I can hear because it is speaking loudly and clearly in your beautiful poem Alexis. Really nicely done my friend.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/10/2017 10:15:00 AM

Sweet poem, Alexis. Love the last line. You really make me feel the spring coming in. Lovely poem. Love always.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/10/2017 10:12:00 AM

Hello Alexis. You wrote such beautiful words to share. The love comes through. What a special day when love is found. Just check out your first line in the second stanza. This entry is beautiful. Well done

Phil Capitano

Date: 3/10/2017 9:32:00 AM

Very romantic Alexis and congrats on finding your soulmate.