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At first, only a few droplets fall from heaven to quench the heat. And like drips of perspiration, splashes start to freckle the street. What begins as a light sprinkle morphs into a raging downpour. And water pools around manholes, for flooded drains can take no more. Lightning splinters fragmented skies, as thunder makes the windows shake. And the wind howls like a banshee, garbage cans toppling in its wake. Paved roads and concrete sidewalks are less than useless as a blotter. And islands begin to appear, awash in a flood of water. After the summer storm passes, raindrops dwindle to just a few. And as the wind starts to calm down, parting clouds reveal skies of blue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/26/2018 8:12:00 PM
Lovely description, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2016 8:52:00 AM
You paint a wonderful picture with your words Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/23/2016 3:19:00 PM
You paint a vivid picture with your words with this masterful quatrain, Emile. Elaine
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Elaine, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/23/2016 11:57:00 AM
In North in the rainy country, the sun is arises first in the men`soul. Very good depiction of weather and feelings and the special rhythm. Laudable imagery and echoes of flood and kind of melancholy and clouds and hope human mistakes can be cleaned without tragic events. Not the seasons are as they once were.
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Ovidiu, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/23/2016 9:44:00 AM
Very Nice. It makes me long for summer, (even more).
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Date: 2/23/2016 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Luke, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

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