A Starry Sky

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July stars shimmer almost everywhere They wield the love of God for us to share Sky was shining with gold blooms and bush breath Moon`s afterglow gives me rainbow tears meth Written: July 06, 2022 5TH Place Contest Winner The Sky in July Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich Checked by HMS.COM / 10 Syllables per line

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2022 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A Lovely Write/Picture. Love It. Have a great/blessed day...................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2022 11:52:00 AM

very pretty. Did you realize you needed ABAB rhyme? That is why you did not get fourth place. Just wanted you to know that. Congrats, my friend.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/17/2022 6:29:00 PM

Thanks for reading placing and commenting on my poem. Appreciated.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/7/2022 5:41:00 AM

Lovely photo and lovely poem, Lasaad.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2022 4:40:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. I don't go out at night very much anymore, so I don't really get to see the night sky, but I am sure it was filled with manmade shinning around the fourth. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/7/2022 1:02:00 AM

Great feast for Americans. Best for a win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/6/2022 8:29:00 PM

Those lovely July stars!

Valsa George

Date: 7/6/2022 7:55:00 PM

I envy the July sky you have painted. In my part of the country, July is a month of monsoon rains and the sky is hardly clear any time . All the best in the contest, dear Lasaad !