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A Star in Your Sky

I'd like to be a Star in your sky ~ if only my fears would let me fly

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Date: 3/14/2024 12:16:00 PM
Hello Gershon, I like this very much. My Fav, Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 2/27/2024 2:35:00 PM
Apologies for not spotting this sooner, G.W. (Struggling with a mega write for almost no-one to read…. But it’s become a challenge). Congrats on this POTD with a sentiment few of us will fail to recognise. Terry
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Date: 2/19/2024 12:01:00 PM
G~ missed your POTD,, sorry! I bear greetings of nelated congratulations., Tou have a gift if saying so much, in so few words. Congratulations. Love, Pangie xx
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Date: 2/18/2024 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations to you Gershon on today's POTD honour greetings from Turkey. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/19/2024 7:16:00 AM
Hey, Tom. Nice to see that you are able to travel so much. When you come back, I'll look for your instructional video on 'How to Do the Turkey Trot.' lol. ~ Atad Jealous
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Date: 2/19/2024 7:10:00 AM
Hey, Tom. Nice to see that you are able to travel so much. When you come back, I'll look for your instructional video on 'How to Do the Turkey Trot.' lol. ~ Atad Jealous
Date: 2/18/2024 8:49:00 PM
Congratulations! Well deserved. :)
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Date: 2/19/2024 7:08:00 AM
Thanks for noticing the POTD. P.S: Sure would like to read some poems from P.S. Please let he know for me, O.K? Cheerful greetings, gw
Date: 2/18/2024 8:08:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/18/2024 8:11:00 PM
Thanks, Robert. Nice of you to notice. ~ Gershon
Date: 2/18/2024 6:50:00 PM
Gershon, you shine like a star so stay where you are. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day. Beryl
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Date: 2/18/2024 6:55:00 PM
Very nice of you to notice this POTD, Beryl. Shine on, sister!
Date: 2/18/2024 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations, Gershon, on your POTD - a tender, thought-provoking, very concise, piece of writing! Almost like a Haiku with human sentiments! Don't we all feel these emotions sometime in our lives?
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Date: 2/18/2024 6:23:00 PM
Yes, I think we do feel these emotions, Mala. Thank you for noticing this POTD. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 2/18/2024 5:56:00 PM
Self doubt will always keep you grounded. A little confidence goes a long way. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Gershon, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/18/2024 4:26:00 PM
Hello Gershon, Congratulations on your .PTD. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/19/2024 10:05:00 AM
Hello Gershon, You are very welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 2/18/2024 3:41:00 PM
masterful use of words
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:01:00 PM
Appreciate the comment, Terry. Have a great week, Gershon
Date: 2/18/2024 2:19:00 PM
Brilliant BB…..Congratulations my friend of POTD! Debx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/18/2024 5:02:00 PM
Deb, our poetry is almost as brilliant as we are. lol. Thanks, gw
Date: 2/18/2024 1:13:00 PM
Many congratulations Gershon for your POTD. This is a really lovely couplet. Beautiful few words that convey so much. Loved it. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/18/2024 5:03:00 PM
I try to keep 'em short. That way they match my attention span. Eh, D.D.
Date: 2/18/2024 11:48:00 AM
Spring is just around the corner, so prepare for takeoff. Skyrockets in flight my friend. Congratulations Gershon! Robert
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:04:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. Peace, Gershon
Date: 2/18/2024 10:20:00 AM
Very often the only thing that holds a person back...or from spreading his wings. Congrats on POTD, G.
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:05:00 PM
Yup, the old 'Fear Factor.' Thanks, Jim.
Date: 2/18/2024 10:18:00 AM
A beautiful sentiment
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:04:00 PM
Thanks for such a nice comment, Mat.
Date: 2/18/2024 10:04:00 AM
Gershon, congratulations on your POTD. So much is expressed in your couplet with its striking imagery and deep emotions. So happy for you! Blessings.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/18/2024 5:06:00 PM
Amazing how much we can EXpress when we DEpress those keys. ~ Cy KIA Tryst
Date: 2/18/2024 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Gershon! Thought provoking Couplet, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:08:00 PM
Thanks, Bill... I sure like your new avatar. Great! ~ gw
Date: 2/18/2024 7:20:00 AM
Dear Gershon, So sweet is this short couplet of yours. Congratulations on POTD recognition. Enjoyed it..
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:09:00 PM
Short and sweet is my goal... Thanks, Nancy.
Date: 2/18/2024 6:23:00 AM
Aww. this is so cute. You can be a land-locked star gw. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! laf :)
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:10:00 PM
'Land-locked,' eh? lol. Hadn't heard that expression in a while, Linda. ~ Gershon
Date: 2/18/2024 5:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Gershon :) - Few words can say much more than an A4-sized poem :) - hugs
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:10:00 PM
As they say, sometimes "less is more," Anne-Lise. Thanks for noticing this POTD.
Date: 2/18/2024 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a lovely write. Enjoy your wonderful day with your win. Blessings..................
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:11:00 PM
Hey, Paula. Trying my best to enjoy. Happiness and Glee, Gershon
Date: 2/18/2024 5:11:00 AM
Gershon, a sweet poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/18/2024 5:11:00 PM
Tania, thanks for noticing this one. Have a wonderful week, Gershon
Date: 2/18/2024 5:02:00 AM
Hello Gershon, congratulations for POTD. This is a great couplet and says so much in a very few words. Excellent my friend! - Blessings, Daniel
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/18/2024 5:12:00 PM
Daniel, He who blesses is himself blessed. Thank you, Gershon
Date: 2/18/2024 4:54:00 AM
Well, Gershon, there are those who believe that you have your feet planted firmly in mid air......or at least your pen. Nice one
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/18/2024 5:12:00 PM
All I know, John, is that it's tired and I'm getting late...
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