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A Souper Good Bye

how do i say good bye to a group of girls and a crowd of guys and try to speak with tears in eyes of struggles we have vocalized of emotions we have emphasized of passions we have recognized of feelings we hope others realize of truth a little compromised in short we let the world know that we spoke and that we spoke eloquently God made broken hearts pick up pens and write what he was saying to them God took creative minds and wrote purposes so divine God put love in lonely hearts that picked up pens and created art and unlike most that toast the occasion tempted by the devil to drink and forget we the scribes chisel our words in stone reminding our posterity that they are not alone each and every word has grown and some times spoken from the Throne our speech, our claim our poem WILL LIVE ON!

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Date: 7/7/2009 9:15:00 PM
spiritual, dude...nice, jim and thanks for comments.
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Date: 6/13/2009 4:17:00 PM
Awesome poem John, i think you had them worried that this was a goodbye poem>>James
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Date: 4/1/2009 4:47:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem and I'm glad you didn't leave! This wasbefore I found this site and Iwe woudn't have met! Hope you enjoyed your sunshine today! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/6/2008 10:54:00 AM
a great piece, glad your still here and thank you for reading my poem and for your comment
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Date: 8/9/2008 5:56:00 PM
Thanks for your comments on my work, and yes, I would miss you if you left, Always, Christy...
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