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A Sonnet On Shame

The mind of youth is a bird bold and free Flew with wings spread on unsafe adventure Harsh time hadn’t taught her yet to worry Playing with fire became her nature. Glow of beauty attracted fireflies with flair Took her to a game of fire to play The forbidden game burnt her hands and hair She concealed shame in mind out of display. Nothing escapes closed society's glare Facing the pry in remorse and surprise Her wide eyes could only freeze in shocked stare To cover the shame the burnt hands could rise. Fingers purse the lips, half-cover the face Lest shame spills, on fingertips fire burns. September 6, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/13/2017 7:31:00 PM
A lovely sonnet Subimal. I especailly love the first line of your second stanza. Congratulations on your win! :) Susan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/14/2017 2:11:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for visiting and appreciating.
Date: 9/13/2017 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Subimal. :))
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Date: 9/13/2017 9:02:00 AM
Animal, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement
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Date: 9/13/2017 6:54:00 AM
Congrats Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/14/2017 2:16:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay.
Date: 9/13/2017 5:51:00 AM
A good sonnet, however the last two lines need to also rhyme in a sonnet.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/14/2017 2:10:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating my effort. I knew but I compromised rhyme for syllable count. I would be careful in future.

Book: Shattered Sighs