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A Song of Defeat

I hammered some words Out from the quarry of my brain They fell around in shards; Some like boulders, Some like rocks and rubble I picked them up one by one. Block on block, I piled them up Thinking I could build a ‘pleasure dome’ But, When it was time for the workman To marvel over the beauty and wonder Of his dream creation His masonry tumbled down Like sand castles built By little hands on sea strands Or dunes of quicksand sliding down I have lost count of the times, This has happened before. Now I stay resigned, Amid a heap of debris Is there any use feeling remorse? When Rome was burning, Like Nero fiddling on his harp, I sit on this pile of wreck Piping my thoughts away In the cusp between victory and defeat Exacting as much ecstasy as I can Before the truth looms large In all its stark nakedness!
____________________________________ May.14.2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/13/2022 11:11:00 AM
"To every thing there is a season" and a change of attitude will permit you to construct from the debris! Aloha!
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Date: 5/13/2022 9:31:00 AM
Valsa, what an amazing Free Verse poem you have penned, so many wonderful lines, it is hard to pick a favorite, so I have to Fav the entire poem, blessings ~ Constance
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Date: 5/13/2022 9:02:00 AM
Valsa, this is an exquisitely-crafted poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Date: 5/13/2022 8:17:00 AM
We cannot build anything that lasts. Our mental brain is too fragile. Blessings
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Date: 5/13/2022 7:58:00 AM
Splendid write, Valsa--life builds castles but also dismantles them. Victory and defeat are both part of living-- as you convey through your emotive words.
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Date: 5/13/2022 7:04:00 AM
Valsa, you have a stunning way with words. The inner turmoil rages on, as does the approaching deceit that will follow a brief period of bliss. Even when the danger of failure looms, we must keep battling to reclaim victory.
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