A Snowflake

I gazed upon the crystal only hard before the thaw and as you warmed to melt your gem-like qualities seemed of mine to adore unlike the slush of snow unlike the muddies of rain unlike a city's drainage a heart needs only another willing to sustain for love is greater immortal than the many painted temples with flawless sculpted gods far greater than most paradise imagined above the ringing stars and their singing elucidating bards love is more the remnant sea almighty rivers and streams real lords of man and lands within their never-ending travails carrying life's speckles of gold as well as life's sentient rearranging sands

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Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 9/28/2022 9:14:00 PM

Last four words. (typo) Eliz.

Joe Dimino
Date: 9/29/2022 10:35:00 AM

Now I get it. You gave me a needed laugh. I did not read your first comment. So I kept looking at my poem, trying to find the error in the last four words. Spell check. Google search. Finally called my wife, and she was elucidating. Thank you, Elizabeth. I often do it myself, especially in my comments. I find errors in books, after, who knows how many proofreaders. It's funny with my comment. Please leave it. Thank you for taking precious time to read the works of others.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 9/28/2022 9:13:00 PM

A whole world in the lest four words! Elizabeth

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2022 6:14:00 PM

so very very poetic. A class act, Joe

Joe Dimino
Date: 9/22/2022 7:21:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Can't be a poet and not be a bit romantic~ goes with the territory. Blessings my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/21/2022 1:47:00 PM

love is so much more than all of these things, it's the epitome of beauty and grace wrapped in one, your eloquent words thrive in my heart today, A fav. :)

Joe Dimino
Date: 9/21/2022 5:27:00 PM

Oh wow! Thank you. You made my day my friend! Could not pay me a nicer compliment. Blessings!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/20/2022 4:38:00 PM

Hi Prince Such beauty, imagery and depth in this work. It shines with your introspective soul. Exemplified in the last three lines especially. I agree, also on the line ..love is greater Innortal hand painted temples with flawless gods….a Fav, Prince, Pangie xx

Joe Dimino
Date: 9/20/2022 6:38:00 PM

Thank you, Pangie; this was a lot of fun to write. Not using punctuation is a challenge for me. Blessings my friend. I had to get away from the book for a bit, missing poetry. But I may be gone again for awhile.

Susan Woodrow

Date: 9/19/2022 5:30:00 PM

Such a beautiful read! :)

Joe Dimino
Date: 9/19/2022 8:05:00 PM

Thank you, Susan; I truly appreciate the encouragement. Blessings my friend. Have a great day!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/19/2022 11:07:00 AM

Joe your Poetry was a pleasure to read...

Joe Dimino
Date: 9/19/2022 11:18:00 AM

Thank you, Michael; blessings my friend! Have a great day!