A Smidgen

Give a pigeon just a smidgen
And his friends will flock to share
While each sparrow’s focus narrows,
Wond’ring if it’s worth the dare.

Soon a robin may come bobbin’
Though he’s just consumed a worm
Which the grackle tried to tackle,
Losing out by just a squirm.

Then the seagull, looking regal,
Takes a dive to catch a fish
As the finches land mere inches
From a shiny take-out dish.

In the city, streets are gritty
But the birds still find a meal
For the locals (and some yokels)
Leave them lots that they can steal.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Baker Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Sorry I'm late, but wanted to congratulate you on your you POTD, Ilene! It was a fun, well thought-out poem. I enjoyed reading it. I hope you enjoyed your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
Bauer Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 1:17 PM
Thank you, Bill! It is a nice feeling to have a work recognized.
Manassian Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Well deserving POTD spot, dear. Thank God that these birds find ways to survive.
Bauer Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 1:16 PM
Thank, Eileen! I think birds would get along fine without the crumbs or seed that people toss at them.
Kaufman Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 1:06 AM
Dear Ilene, A delayed yet hearty Congratulations on this perfectly rhymed and clever POTD. It is very cleverly writte.
Bauer Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 1:16 PM
Thank you for the comment and congrats, Nancy!
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 1:44 AM
- Enjoyed reading this lovely and fun poem, Ilene ... congratulations on your p.o.d.t. :) - hugs
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Always so nice to hear from you, Anne-Lise!
Wolf Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 9:30 PM
Watch the birdie! Congrats on POTD, Ilene, for this terrific write! :) Gershon
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Thank you again, Gershon! So nice of you to stop by to congratulate me…
Greenhough Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 3:38 PM
Hooray. I love this poem and want to congratulate you on POTD. Enjoy your day.
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:11 AM
So nice of you to drop by again, Hilda! A double thank you!
Fowler Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 2:40 PM
Had to fav this - it's just too cute Ilene. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Awwww, thank you very much, Linda!
M  Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 1:23 PM
It makes me happy to see your name up here Ilene!! Congratulations on POTD!! Great poem about the different birds! Enjoyed….Debx
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Thank you for that very sweet comment, Deb!
Lawless Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 11:51 AM
I had a smidgen as a pet once....very tiny and needy...but easy to exercise...just a walk around the plate...Great write Ilene, easy flow, and rhyme scheme,
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:08 AM
Ha! A smidgen must make a great pet! Thanks for the grin, John!
Slaughter Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Absolutely delightful versifying, Ilene, and it's wonderful to see this piece on POTD. Your work doesn't get selected nearly often enough, in my opinion.
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:07 AM
Jim - I treasure your opinion and am always delighted to hear from you…
Goldsmith Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 8:54 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "A Smidgen" write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:06 AM
Thanks for the comment, Paula!
Summers Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Fun poem, great flow and rhyme schemes. John
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:05 AM
Thank you so much, John!
Achara Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 8:29 AM
A delightful poem. Congrats on POTD.
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:04 AM
I appreciate it, Chetta!
Turner Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 7:43 AM
What a fun read, Ilene. Kudos for POTD honors. Always a privilege to read your rhymes and I love the subject. Hoping you are well:)
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:04 AM
So nice to hear from you, Daniel! All is well here and I hope the same for you…
Thacker Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 6:26 AM
Such a cool poem. Well done, Ilene.
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:03 AM
Thanks so much, Shane!
Rodgers Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Dear Ilene, Congratulations on this beautiful masterpiece capturing city life's bustling energy through the lens of its avian inhabitants. I just loved how the birds flocking together for a smidgen of food reflects the human experience of communal sharing and competition. Your poetic words evoke a sense of camaraderie amidst the urban landscape, showing us the resilience and adaptability of life in the midst of chaos. CONGRATS ON POTD! - Blessings, Daniel
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:02 AM
It’s always a pleasure to get one of your beautifully written comments, Daniel…
May Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 4:18 AM
Lovely write, Congrats on POTD
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:02 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Kitchin Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 3:20 AM
Ilene, love your fun poem, congratulations on POTD.
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:01 AM
Thank you, Tania!
Seeker Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 1:41 AM
A delightful, light hearted read ~ enjoyed! Warmest congratulations on POTD, Ilene
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Thank you very much for taking the time to comment!
Callus Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 1:24 AM
I love the topic, content and smooth flow of this delightful poem, Irene. I put my leftovers out in the back yard and garden and birds make sure it never goes to waste! ~ Congratulations on p.o.t.d. Regards // paul
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 10:59 AM
Thanks, Paul! You’re lucky to get to see them up close. I had to stop filling the feeder in my son’s yard after a coyote showed up and grabbed a squirrel feasting on the seeds dropped by the birds. I miss watching them!
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May 2, 2024 at 1:05 AM
So many birds in the world, I often wonder how they find enough food to eat. A charmed poem Ilene, congratulations on having received poem of the day… Beryl
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 10:57 AM
Thank you, Beryl! I think there are many more insects than birds, so that might add to their diets…
Jones Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 12:38 AM
What a delightful potd! I enjoyed the rhyme and the lighthearted bird energy! Congratulations!
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Thanks so much for reaching out, Karen!
Cunningham Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 12:32 AM
An enjoyable read Ilene, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Thanks for letting me know it was poem of the day, Tom! I had no idea…
Greenhough Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 8:59 PM
Yes, bird secret life is exposed. This is an enjoyable poem that indicates the poet must have some background in ornithology. It left me wanting to know more bird stories.
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Thanks, Hilda! I recognize most of the local birds but Googled to find out more and discovered finches (perfect for rhyming!)…
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 1:43 PM
oh how charming is this secede i can just see the birds dyeing for a meal:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 10:51 AM
Thank you, Jan! Always a treat to hear from you…
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