A Sign the Size of a Jeep

For five days now, it has sat
Black and gray, reflecting heat
Actually, a very nice Jeep
With expired tags, rumpled bookbags
Yet nobody has moved it from my house
For five days now

As I surmise, with my poet's eyes
Journeys of flattened grass, of dusty glass
A map discarded, a gypsy started
A young soul seeking adventure's answers
To grow into futures of unlined space
Or older hearts, chasing the chase
The remembered rush of chances to take
As a new wind erases
The years from their faces

Perhaps a journal, sketching a desert dawn
Or moon rippled seas, or fragrant rain
Calling them forward to green spun lanes
Oh, there could be hours to ride
Mountains to taste, moments to cry

(Dear Muse, have you been so obscure
that I needed a sign - the size of a Jeep
blocking my front door?)

Now I, shaken at last from lethargy
To pick up my pen, should perhaps thank them~
Before I have their car towed.

6/29/22

(true story)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 7/25/2022 6:34:00 PM
It takes talent and experience to write a poem like this. I love the flow and interaction of reality and perception. Very nicely done.
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Date: 7/16/2022 4:49:00 PM
Made me smile with that closing line, Michelle. Glad your muses is getting you writing again. lol Hugs, Bill
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Date: 7/11/2022 11:00:00 AM
Hi Michelle, This is a magnificent write, a truly talented creative tale of a jeep - your poetic inspiration is a vision of astonishment, beauty, and passionate artistry. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/9/2022 8:02:00 PM
Interesting where your mind wandered over a jeep that was parked in front of your house. You described that adventurous spirit very well.
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Date: 7/9/2022 6:03:00 AM
Inspiration takes many forms. Your muse did well to pay attention. :) Terrific poem Michelle! Linda
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Date: 7/4/2022 2:47:00 PM
Michelle, there is a philosophical beauty and depth in your musings on this brief life interruption. Your fertile imagination comes alive as it fills in a back story to the unanswered questions. I particularly liked your internal rhymes in stanza two and the phrasing of "new wind erases the years from their faces", and "moon rippled seas". It's great to read you again, my friend ~ John
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/5/2022 8:15:00 PM
I seem to be in the dreaded creative drought, but this came from a Jeep someone had left parked in front of our house for over a week before they finally came back and moved it - at least I got a poem out of it!
Date: 7/3/2022 2:18:00 PM
Praiseworthy reflective philosophical musing with the authentic story of the metaphorical sign.... blessings
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/5/2022 8:13:00 PM
Thank you very much, appreciate it
Date: 7/1/2022 5:44:00 PM
You are an amazement, Michelle ~ to write a lovely poem about an abandoned jeep! I love especially the lines "a gypsy started, a young soul seeking adventure's answers. To grow into futures of unlined space. Or older hearts chasing the chase." I'm glad you're back :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/1/2022 6:40:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Ann, I'm glad to be back too!
Date: 6/29/2022 6:56:00 PM
Your poem is beautiful, Michelle. The way you let your thoughts roam in this instance was just beautiful.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/1/2022 6:42:00 PM
Thank you very much, appreciate it
Date: 6/29/2022 6:27:00 PM
Good luck with that, as it may take YEARS before an abandoned car is towed in Honolulu! Aloha!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/1/2022 6:42:00 PM
They did finally come back for it, thank goodness~
Date: 6/29/2022 5:52:00 PM
Your imagination ran wild with this one, Michelle -- and a very endearing wild it was! ~ Beep, beep
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/1/2022 6:41:00 PM
Yep it is funny where inspiration will strike!
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