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A Short Rain

A practice kiss with her hand Misses body, heart The droplets like her fall — She amasses their death Even inside, outside Let rain go no further.

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Ink Empress

Date: 7/12/2025 8:19:00 AM

" let rain go no further " so beautiful and creative, well written, i can feel the warmth of rain in your word weaving! Pleasure reading your poem, sending you light always

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/11/2025 7:18:00 AM

Love that first line, dear Paige!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/10/2025 11:49:00 PM

A lovely write Paige <3

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/10/2025 6:41:00 AM

Misses body, heart... such feelings of immense sadness. Wish it didn't miss the mark. Thanks for your continual support. Blessings

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/10/2025 12:54:00 AM

Rain brings such thoughts melancholy riddles the heart. I found the first line adorable Paige~

Bill Baker

Date: 7/9/2025 9:04:00 PM

A kiss as gentle as rain in the form of sprinkle. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Paige. I'll be following your poetry now! A poet in Texas, Bill

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/9/2025 7:06:00 PM

enjoyed your drizzle of poetic tempo, paige...it's rainy season here ; i can truly relate to your end line...a beauty!

Anne Winter

Date: 7/9/2025 3:05:00 AM

Gorgeous...just gorgeous...<3

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/9/2025 2:06:00 AM

Very very beutiful.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2025 1:16:00 PM

Right now I am sure wishing for rain for my yard. It rained a lot at beginning of June but nothing since then! So I say opposite than you at the end line!

Tom Woody

Date: 7/8/2025 12:25:00 PM

Cupid's arrow doesn't always hit the target. Let's hope she does better next go round