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A Shattered Mind

He tells you he loves you, but does he really mean it ? Or is it just his way of keeping you at his convience or to block the love of the one who truly means it. Your mind tells you one thing and your heart holds on to the longing of the 3 little words I Love You destroying your mind time after time if only you could rewind your mind. Because true love shows itself over time without the consent of your heart and mind. A feeling that is never questioned with time. And is felt in your heart, mind, body and soul all the time. So no replays will be in the question of your mind. Reliving the love that was never questioned at anytime. So pick up the pieces of the questions in your mind there is no more space for wasted time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/5/2015 3:04:00 AM
Angelita, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/5/2015 2:06:00 AM
How true- real love gives without consent. A great write, Angelita, and a big welcome to Poetry Soup. I'm sure that you'll have a great time sharing your work with this happy mix of fellow wordsmiths. Enjoy. Viv
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Date: 7/4/2015 6:31:00 PM
Angelita, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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