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A Sensitive Lad A quiet sensitive lad named Fred had an ego so fragile it bled his great genius and vision were met with derision so spent the rest of his life in bed

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Date: 12/27/2021 3:19:00 PM
Insightful and moving, a bleeding ego, awesome!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/4/2022 1:54:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya, glad you enjoyed the humor in my metaphor!
Date: 12/26/2021 4:39:00 PM
Love this Robert …..wasted vision due to depression a common occurrence unfortunately these days! Debx
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 12/27/2021 9:14:00 AM
Thank you for your insightful response. I love everything Aussi! My best, Robert

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