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A Sense of Emptiness

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to acknowledge my pain this emptiness in my soul I contain where loneliness abides and my reflection hides when every thought divides as my spirit pulls away from my brain to leave a deeper hole that swallows another piece of my soul with its breadth and its girth and scarcity of dearth with no purpose or worth where there's nothing left for me to console this dark desolate space with its origins, I can never trace where shadows come to dwell to own my empty well with churning raging hell to burn in my bottomless pit my face my soul will always cry for unknown reasons with the question why for whom am I to blame with nothing left to claim only ashes remain they'll be a hole in my soul when I die contest Rhyme Me a Poem 12/20/17 sponsor Broken Wings

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Date: 1/14/2018 8:02:00 PM
Just beautiful Frederic! I really loved hearing you read it!!! You have a very soothing voice ... almost hypnotic. Congratulations on your win!! ~Judy
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:24:00 AM
Well done, congrats.
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:08:00 AM
Frederic, dark and deep, just the way I like, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write ! And I liked hearing your voice speak it too !
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Date: 1/12/2018 5:33:00 AM
beautifully expressed dear Frederic :) -luloo
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Date: 1/11/2018 11:11:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Frederic. Well done.
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Date: 1/11/2018 10:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Frederic, so very sad , but beautiful.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/23/2017 3:02:00 PM
Dear Frederic, you are a kindred spirit. Love how your mind works even not a waisted or forced word in this rhymed world, and a force to pull the reader in a Poe-like manner into these thoughts---wonderfully dark and deep!
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Date: 12/21/2017 6:52:00 AM
This poem reaches the reader Frederic with intense feelings. Well written! :)
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Date: 12/20/2017 4:31:00 PM
This brings tears to my eyes; sometimes you wish you didn't relate. Beautiful Frederic.
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Date: 12/20/2017 3:24:00 PM
You read poem very well.. this is a deep poem and the way you read it gave it more impact... excellent..
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