A Second Chance

She clutched a glimpse of blinking reverie yet now, through stardust flushing out the light it slid, languished; washed by the grains of time on pathways where love had been slashed in half unearthing all the weeds of cycles bleak. From thinning mists that hang on her dim eyes the finest consolations from his leave were comfort, songs and roots of joy well glazed; and though a dull heart bore as twilight fell she prayed their charmed flames would ignite; again. Heather Ober's 10 Lines Contest * Blank verse, not to be confused with free verse, has a set metrical pattern. It is traditionally written in iambic pentameter, unryhmed. by nette onclaud
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June 7, 2013 at 9:38 AM
this is a nice poem... Congratulations... Linda
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 7:02 AM
congratulations nette xx
Calubiran Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 12:37 AM
Congrats Ate Nette! ^A^
Ober Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 1:18 PM
Nette, you took my breath away with this one! Wonderful job, and congratulations on your win in my contest :)
Richards Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 12:57 PM
You never need a second chance. First time is always a charming poem!!
Makama Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 4:23 PM
great write.
Devnath  Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 10:21 AM
True heart waits till ends. Lovely done my friend. Thanks......,always, bl
Oyewole Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:29 PM
Very well penned. Well done. AO
Poet Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:10 PM
Another amazing poem from you Nette!Lovely read.
Manassian Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 10:39 AM
God is also a God of second changes...lovely ending to this poem, Nette!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 10:02 AM
A phantasmagoria of images and expressions that dazzle the mind! Excellent!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 9:27 AM
I believe in second chances for some even third and forth. I enjoyed your poem.
Sivey Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 8:07 AM
This is a wonderfully expressive write my friend! You have brought to me a life of wonderment and amazement with this tremendous poem! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!
Tacito Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Very touching. A strengthened need for the familiar. This was excellent.
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 7:36 AM
- Today's beautiful poem from my friend Nette. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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