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A Season To Remember

Emboldened metal torso dusts her in pink Himalayan flecks Her mahogany neck persuaded to turn in his grip Rendering fragrant dark bite from her deep spice chest The two infused together perfect a harmonious marriage Her mahogany neck persuaded to turn in his grip Seasoning lamb's tendered flesh, in a glistening delight The two infused together perfect a harmonious marriage Chef, shaker, and grinder bow in sumptuous applause Seasoning lamb's tendered flesh, in a glistening delight Refined palate and palisades of sharpened cutlery adorn Chef, shaker, and grinder bow in sumptuous applause The curtains drawn, lights hushed in reverie and sighs Refined palate and palisades of sharpened cutlery adorn Rendering fragrant dark bite from her deep spice chest The curtains drawn, lights hushed in reverie and sighs Emboldened metal torso dusts her in pink Himalayan flecks

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Date: 2/23/2021 4:19:00 PM
A fine example of a well-written pantoum.
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Date: 1/21/2021 8:24:00 PM
Hello Richard … mouth watering and very interesting poem - well done Richard - Lindsay
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Date: 1/14/2021 5:17:00 PM
'Chef, shaker, and grinder bow in sumptuous applause.' -- That's an image to treasure. Intriguing write, Richard. Very interesting... :) gw
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Date: 1/14/2021 2:46:00 PM
Passionate work. Comparison of love to spices. Your visit to my page is always encouraging. Sara
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Date: 1/14/2021 11:49:00 AM
Wow! So interesting!
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Date: 1/13/2021 7:56:00 PM
The chef must be a man for all seasons. A beautifully imagined pantoum! :)
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Date: 1/13/2021 2:48:00 PM
Lovely pantoum seasoning Richard. What time is dinner? :) Linda
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Date: 1/13/2021 2:01:00 PM
This write evokes delicious dish seasoned expertly in your words--well done, Richard.
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Date: 1/13/2021 1:43:00 PM
This has just the right amount of spice, very alluring and seductive!
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Date: 1/13/2021 1:08:00 AM
I like lamb but not too much. Salt is poison for me. Great poem. ~~
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/13/2021 2:38:00 PM
Victor, Lamb & mint jelly. I consider excessive salt poison as well. Everything in moderation. -Richard
Date: 1/12/2021 11:45:00 PM
Love the cryptic blend here in this clever poetry. Harry
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Date: 1/13/2021 2:33:00 PM
harry, Thanks for that. Tried to err on the side of spice. -Richard
Date: 1/12/2021 10:48:00 PM
Very elegant description of a delicious dish. I love lamb and good salt!
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Date: 1/13/2021 2:30:00 PM
Andrea, Thanks for the elegant dish comment. The spice routes are still precious for the rare best. -Richard
Date: 1/12/2021 6:55:00 PM
At first I thought this was a mating ritual until I read further. Very poetic way of describing sea salt and the mouth watering descriptions are sensual. Sounds like a delicious dish.
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Date: 1/12/2021 7:10:00 PM
Juliet, Seasoning is so important in both. -Richard

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