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A Scene of Accident

With broken hand a man was screaming As loud and shrill as a pig squealing Said a man from behind, “You only broke your hand He lost his head and still not shrieking”

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Date: 2/4/2023 7:32:00 AM
Ohhhh!! Morbid...As my great-granddaughter would say that is terrible and horrible. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/30/2022 6:09:00 AM
Humoristic and extremely well-written. I'd be wailing if I injured my skull and my hand at the same time:)
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Date: 1/30/2022 5:35:00 AM
Your last line is very clever. Well done, Valsa.
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Date: 1/30/2022 3:57:00 AM
Lol, if I lost my head and hand I'd be shrieking. Hope your weekend is going well Valsa. Tom
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